This is a really nice read. The characters are well developed and each have their own unique quirks. It is a really good story that is well written,
Hello everyone, the name's Sky not hat anyone asked but with unnecessary introductions out of the way let's go to the review and rating based on the latest chapter(ch.13).1-Writing Quality: The story has a nice writing quality and I haven't seen any spelling mistakes or grammar errors, if there are I didn't see them because I was immersed in the story.[5 Stars Here]2-Story Development: The story has a nice feel to it, we get a minimal background of the MC's past life as to not take too much of the main focus that is his current life. The chapters are all connected and don't randomly seem like we missed a part of it, it's also very fluid and has a great word count for those who are interested in that.[5 Stars Here]3-Character Design: The characters so far have a decent personality and I think it's still soon to see if they have a lot of dept but so far the MC and all the people he interacted with have nice depth to them.[5 Stars Here]4-Updating Stability: The updates seem to follow a certain schedule and each release so far has had more than 2 chapters so it's a win in my book.[5 Stars Here]5-World Background: The world has a decent amount of details, enough to know places but not enough to feel immersed in the locations. What I mean is the setting of the scenes like describing certain locations, in this story we get descriptions like "small but clean apartment" but we don't get a "Uncle Charles office was as one would expect, it had a few pictures with current famous celebrities and some old ones, there where also some trophies and ...". This is what I mean, it doesn't paint a picture in the mind, I just think yeah he's in the office done. And since it may not be a recurring scene it might not matter much but at that moment it's important.[4 Stars Here]Overall:4.8Personal Opinion: I was recommended this book by @Extra26 and it was one of those recommendations that you don't regret so try reading at least 5 chapters before you say "D**n it has Harem tag, Ouch System cheat" and so on before giving it a try because the execution of the story seems worth it so far.
The only problem of this book is the chapter update Come on man at less 5 chapter a week.actually review good romance good world building good overpowerd main character. He have three different personalities nice group of friends.
Intriguing story so far(ch.28). I like the characters and the very evident setup for development. The interactions seem fairly natural. I am looking forward to how the power system will develop. Good luck author! Hope you can keep it up, I will be following.
It's boring and uncreative, and there's no real conflict anywhere. But you probably already knew that from looking at the summary.What you might not know is how badly translated this is. Have you every heard of the Wuxing realm? Ever had a MC cast a "supernormal knowledge spell"? Yeah, me neither.
Story is quite good. System where the ML gets rewards after every kill or after he imprisoned someone. Translation is horrible. MTL might be better.
Honestly, quite good in my opinion.An interesting premise and idea that are valued by the author give a charming touch to the work. I recommend reading this novel, although, sincerely, I also highly recommend the author to review some senfencas that become confusing throughout the chapters. Moreover, I'll come back later in the story to do a more precise analysis. For now, keep up the good work and effort, author.
Wow!This is such a nice story,the writing quality is superb!I love the way the writer portrays it's scene, that one could imagine being inside the system too?A must read for everyone,this story is really promising, accolades dear author ?❤️
This story is kind of similar the one i read into other apps called SAGO the name story is THE GOD OF WAR BACK FROM THE DEAD. anyways I'm gonna keep reading this one, i love this kind of story though..
Hello Well the author finally did it .He has finally made the storyPretty good written till now and fore shadowing is nice. Well we just need to wait for an editor now to jumpstart things
dude yes another in wont be able to put down. you are a genuis!
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