Perfection to its finest would t want to change it in any way a five for perfecr story and a 6 for the rest
It's good at first, then it's become repetitive, repeating the same plot over and over, and side characters all become dumb; they can't even understand a situation. Mc is the only one with a brain, but again, his character should be a gangstar, but about 100 chapters later, he became an introverted teenager.
Yet another amazing book by the author ?
The book is extremely amazing
I don't wanna stop reading
Although I don't really read ML books, i love this one☺️
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This sci-fi adventure story creates an immersive world and casts the reader right into the action as Jen and his allies wake up captives in an alien arena. The imaginative challenges they face are described vividly, from dangerous maze puzzles to a planet filled with exotic wildlife. The relationships forged between the characters feel organic, especially as we learn more of their backstories like Yuna's tragic childhood. The villain Lizayon is suitably menacing as the cruel, godlike being forcing them to compete in his games. The story keeps upping the stakes and twists, like the revelation that they've been thrown into an alternate reality where Lizayon rules supreme. Overall, this is a gripping tale with well-developed characters undergoing engaging trials that constantly push the plot forward. It balances raw action with poignant emotion resulting from the trauma these survivors endure.
Netorare = 5 StarI will give 5 stars to any netorare work, best genre and I hope that NTR lovers grow more and moreI will give 5 stars to any netorare work, best genre and I hope that NTR lovers grow more and more
Shameless review time. So, my book's awesome. And I'll tell you why. My writing quality is pretty good, errors are pretty hard to come by and my vocab is fairly varied. And overall, my sentences flow naturally and words are used in ways that suit their connotations. My use of punctuation is good but I don't tend to use colons or semi colons, not that I think anyone actually cares though lolStory development isn't something I'll talk too in depth about, but, my pacing is on the slightly faster end sometimes but that's about it.Character design, so I think the way I've made character's different to what most would do, but I don't wanna spoil so shoo and read the novel. But, in terms of characterisation, it's pretty good except I'm not sure if I want to tie philosophical themes into characters yet since that takes brain power and knowledge (was planning on making a hedonistic or egoistic character but I need to think a lil bit for that)Update stability, so, I post daily atm but I can and will take rests when I need them, so I don't burn out.World background. So, I think I'm really good at this, a lot of authors just vomit info all over you. But, I prefer to only bring up info when it's relevant, since it's easier to remember and digest that way and leaves a little bit of thinking for you to do.
Good concept, but too many useless details added along with pointless info dumps. The story doesnt flow smoothly and a lot of dialouges are annoyinf or forced. Too much focus on small irrelavant details.
Although it is still early days, the premise of this novel is intriguing. I like that there are others that came to the land of the gods from others worlds as its unique
I read up to chapter 60.There are so many chapters about other characters.Background times ten.Not much was stated about the main character.He was sick because his mom got poisoned.He ran away and they found him (or so they thought).Then there are lik 51 chapters about he side characters.The premise is somewhat interesting but the lack of focus makes this horrible.
I really like your story and am eagerly waiting for your updates. Thx for the new chapter btw and keep up the good work. Love the book and you author. Fighting. ????❤️❤️❤️
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