Lavender reached up, grabbing one of the lines that arched overhead, rested her foot on Leonora's storage chest, and just enjoyed the wind fluttering through her long hair for a moment. "Sorry... I shouldn't have surprised you like that."
This movement was accompanied by something strange, everyone was thinking the same thing, the whole world was thinking the same way all of a sudden, taking only 6 months to revoke the era tested systems and erect a new system, entirely dependant on merit and strength. It was as if the billions that resided in Burkan suddenly decided to agree, that it was best to shape the world that way.
Echidna : "You see, I have made various theories regarding what that reason could be, and who this woman named Contessa is. However, that whole theory turned into a disappointmentー"
We got up from the bench and started walking to the bus stop. Soon enough we were there and on our way home.
this is a honest review from a honest author.you may already know about what's the main idea of this novel is, yep this is a pile of my dropped novel.by the time i upload this review there was 3 novel that i has dropped and add as this novel chapter.hope that i will never never added a new dropped novel here.
it gets annoying having to correct genders even other chapter , however this story is still worth the read with plenty of amusement from the various genres elements it includes
This is not a genre that I would usually read, but it intrigued me a lot! I absolutely enjoyed the world building and the characters! I have absolutely nothing to complain about here. Keep it up, author ????
I don't know what I came here expecting but I certainly got what I had came for. This is phenomenal and awesome. I really want everyone to notice this. Recommended!
Quite the smooth read that engages the reader. I am expectant for the next chapters. Noice. Keep at it, hon. I will hunt you if you ruin it~ ^^
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
The synopsis has its impact alone! If you have to read something of science fiction and a fantasy combined genre and magical realism added ingredient in it, this book will suit you! Great job author!
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