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I am very interested in a story like this, slight differences cause rippling effects. I would recommend this to the curious. Good work ?
I'm speechless. Only 10 chaps in and I can say this is shaping up to be one of the best works of literature my eyes have ever witnessed. The dialogue is intriguing, the characters are compelling all in all, nice work author.
I loved the withering Cold alot. the way the story was written is truly beautiful and captivating. everything i imagine in my mind feels perfect thanks to the amazing storytelling and writing quality. hands down underrated ??
This novel is definitely worth a read, especially for those who enjoy horde-building. Orion is a great chieftain, and I really like his character. The only downside might be some 'sacrifices,' but the author has promised that he will resurrect his kin in another way. I think that's okay, as it makes the novel seem more realistic.
This book is going great, I'm thankful. So much, still yet to uncover, discover and write. See y'all at the end of the book!
Wonderful story keep it up… the book is a thriller…
Book is good. Makes me laugh, and mc is as real as they get. Five stars for now.
Nice. Another story that only have 0 chapter.
finally found something worthwhile to read it has a lot of potential and I hope author will complete the novel
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The Writing Quality is 5 Stars based off the average webnovel, with the Stability of Updates being very good at time of review.Im mentioning this all before because what im going to say is me hating on the story a bit.I dont think the concept was as well executed as it could be, or maybe its just my own interpretation of what I read.The story starts off great, but there seems to be so much filler it dulls the mind, and one of the MC's being this litteral god of weaponry who can create new techniques within a week, makes you want to see the other MC's (Rean's) specialty.And by 64 hes a fuckin blacksmith, now dont get me wrong, I love blacksmithing novels, but to be fair Ive only ever found two. Blacksmithing can be made cool, but it seems that by the time of mid-story, the author just didnt care about making Rean anything special.I mean he has the light element, while Roan has the dark element. There twins, when I read these details I was thinking," Oh thats so badass, theyre gonna have this connection of hate-portrayal (from what I could see by there personalities twoards another) where they actually enjoy eachothers company, but theyll never say that.Rean will be a master healer who benefits the tribe by supporting and giving ideas, while Roan is this master of combat who knows all weapons "Sure thats a bit dramaticized, but Roan does end up being like that, he is a badass kid who knows how to beat people above his realm of cultivation, he knows every weapon in the universe, he makes techniques when hes bored and cultivates hard.What does rean do? Makes fuckin low-quality steel and sells it off, then the next chapter we see Roan hinting to him to try and learn how to use the light element sense he collects it faster than Roan so he should master something of his own instead of relying on Roan, the **** does he do, he makes a god damn light saber.I dont think Rean is especially stupid, I just believe the author is making him retarded.Sorry for the bad grammar and the swear at the end, but this is just so sad to see such a great concept unexplored.
This has become one of my favorite stories so far. I have read the novel 3 times and the manhwa like more than 5 times I think? ? I love, love this story so much! I love Cale and his family members so much!?♥️ They make me laugh, cry, and feel so much more emotions. Thank you so much for the translation, I know it’s hard and taxing but thank you so much!
