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"She sounds like Sachiko!" Kasuke said cheerily with a cheeky smile on his somewhat overweight face.
after reaching my cabin I was holding the photo frame it was a photo of that demon and the owner of this body and one can tell by looking at the picture they were very close there must be a story behind this.
"I have something to tell Micah, Egon, and Lucien. Come, let's take a walk by the riverbank." She smiled as she started to walk. Her words were gentle, but all deities dared not refute nor clarify Prime's question about the mortals. The three deities walked behind her.
When he pointed it out, I started seeing the similarities. "That's why they seemed to familiar. It's no wonder why I couldn't put my finger on it." I starred at it for a bit longer and then pulled out my combat folding knife and started taking the portrait down. Tei must have figured out what I was doing and helped me out. we got the picture down and out of the frame and rolled it up.
"Alright! Then what if I bring back everything to how they were before? Will you agree?"
"Stupid disciple" Marimo mutters "I always tell you to look at your surroundings when you are at a new place but what did you do when you stepped into a new place, the same stuff I warned you about." Marimo shakes his head as he finishes.
"I got you now." The man in the robe says as he appears behind Donna and Janis.
You should make kibo learn from (transmigrated/reincarnated) vegeta martial arts and close quarters combat , and how to manipulate his body better, perfect and create new transformations , as well as how to generate and control divine god ki that can make people become gods and lengthen their lifespan just with ki , he should then make another shikigami to teach divine ki at korin's tower.
"Well, you could take over lands now, it all depends on you if you can protect it, right?" Lidya laughed nervously.
So... to start with this is a novel by a rather new author, as far as I know.The Story is set in the classical system genre with a very strong MC who is like a monstrous genius to all residents in the new world. Former shut-in and so on, classical bullying, complicated family relations, etc.What makes this novel different is it's approach to the former world. Right now we don't know about any dimensional rifts taking him back home to earth or anything but *SPOILER* the system messes with his memories, his perception of emotions, his very empathie.This is an aspect I have seen previously but never to such an extent. It is cleverly infused into the story and you don't get spammed by it, so no worries about it getting repetive on this part.And as you might have guessed in an OP MC novel there will obviously be some face-smacking.The face slapping is there and fine and not forced.It may seem like a repetition as a lot of novels use it but it is nicely integrated into the story flow which gives it a natural feeling so I don't think its gonna be a reason to drop or don't read the novel.But let's start with the rating:Writing quality = 4*It got 4 stars as you have a new author and he's getting used to it, his effort is there and its not a novel where you have to guess the content.To some 4 will seem like a lot but I'm feeling good today so it'll be 4.Stability of Updates = 5*The updates are on a regular basis, a good amount for a new author and there is no drop in quality.Right now, with the current situation, there is nothing to hate on.This can, of course, change so this is temporary.Story Development = 5*MC with painful school and family background goes to another world with a system and fucks up a few people and cities. Cultivation world, fiance, gender-bender disciple and up to now no sect story ( real one).Sounds middle-class I know but its ok and its certainly worth a read.Character Design = 4*Bullied transmigrated new-body MC with problematic parents(one dead) .Loli fiancee with strong background and kinda in the first stage of yanderism.Weregirl-boy disciple with a weird misconception of about the MC and apparently a massive bust, unproportional to her bodysize. Seems to be important as it has been mentioned.And as of the newest chapter a talking system with personality that manipulates the MC's perception.I imagine him as a dude with a rolled-up on a party sitting on a balcony with a few friends and talking about chilling and smoking.And lastly World Background = 4*Well it's a cultivation world with sects, city lords, empires who are at war, a kinda “the holy crusade against all that is evil“ church stuff, and some discrimination towards demi-humans of all kindGeneric but always good for a read.I like it and go on!????
After doing so, Alter kept getting closer, the wolf took a step back for every step Alter took
Fist bump has slain Murlock warrior!
