Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is very interesting, few reincarnations have females as the main protagonist, the beginning was very interesting, the litle siblings are lil cuties, while MC is learning about life~
The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness. I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities.The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything.The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.
I’ve really enjoyed the story so far, the main character is good, the plot is interesting and clear, and the combat is well paced and exciting. A lot of potential for this story.DON'T DROPPED!!! DON'T DROPPED!!! DON'T DROPPED!!! DON'T DROPPED!!!
I like how descriptive this story is. And it is funny too. It's my first time reading novels like this, and I must say, this story looks interesting already. I can tell some crazy stuff will happen as time goes on. Good luck with the story Author ❤️
I hope you can update more ??Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pleaseI like the idea of Percy jackson with gamer abilities.... You need to update more and write more chapters!
i love the eye powers however the fights seem abit complicated especially when he watches the fight between lunatic girl and the supreme saint guy i don't like when the author say "the eye in the void has primordial qi with celestial bodies around it" like what is that supposed to mean and im curios as to why nobody knows the DU clan, but i want to see what the academy is like. Overall I WANT MORE!!!!!
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I really love Your Story and the way you write ✍️ .✍️ ? Thank you for your hard work I Hope you continue to write more stories in the future .??
This novel is basically what you would imagine the son of heaven to be.There's a lot of exaggeration you would maybe even think if it is a gimmick. This novel is very similar to History Number 1 Founder, Library Of Heaven's Path and to some extent History Strongest Senior Brother. So if you loved any of these novels mentioned you will be able to enjoy this novel.
This story is interesting n i cant stop reading it... Its good if this story continue coz it has a lot of potential to be a great story.. It hs been 1 year i think.. Author sama havent updates anythg or gve some comment to this.. But i know tht author sama recently update his/her new bookk..( N alot of things to do) .. So yeah..n i keep waitng for this story to gt update?....Ps.. Keep it up the good work author sama.. N not frgt ur 2nd book.. N this book oso.. Ciao...
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