I am hooked on the first chapter
love the way its written. lots of action that flows smoothly from chapter to chapter. good story line and strong characters.
the book is nice but there is problem with grammer
Nice book. Keep writing pleasee
I love your book. Keep up the good work aithor. Also, nice cover.
this book was sooo good. I can't wait for the next one.
Need more chapters!!!
I liked the concept, but it moves so quickly and with repetitive abuse from everyone, including her 1st and second chance mate. I think her stubbornness was meant to feel strong, but in truth, it comes across as rash and immature. The fact the king chains, whips, and starves her doesn't scream love
That's it. I'm done following this book. I really hoped it would tie back in somehow, but it doesn't seem to be. the last 150 chapters or so have been two completely different stories with no tie ins. And I've seen no response to my previous comment, so im sorry, but you have lost me.
great book. loved it. would definitely recommend.
The book has been quite engaging so far. Up until chapter 102, I haven't found myself skipping ahead like I did with other similar novels. The protagonist's strength in the dungeon is impressive, but they exhibit vulnerability when outside, particularly when interacting with the male lead virtually since he refuses to log out. Their emotional intelligence (EQ) and problem-solving skills (IQ) seem to plummet during these online encounters, with constant miscommunication and unnecessary overthinking. I just hope the author doesn't drag the explanation for why the male lead stays in the game too long, because that's a crucial factor for their relationship development. Until that issue is resolved, their connection won't progress further.
The female lead is quite amusing, and her sons have distinct personalities. These characters genuinely feel like real people, which I appreciate. However, the plot is rather disorganized. It seems the author struggles with maintaining continuity. The female lead appears to have traveled from the past through some bizarre time warp to the future, so you’d expect people who remember her to react similarly to her sons, right? Wrong.
For example:
- When her family finds her, they immediately recognize her without questioning why she hasn’t aged or even seems to have aged backward.
- The man who kidnapped her doesn’t question how a woman in her 20s suddenly became underage at some point.
- Shu Ran, who pursued her before the "time skip," also doesn’t question why she hasn’t aged at all. She even tells him that the girl he knew was an adult and that she is now a teenager, yet he dismisses it. The novel mentions that he looks around 20, but her sons are 20—so if she pursued him in the timeline before the "time skip," wouldn’t he be around 40 by now?