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The synopsis seems interesting enough, but I have a question. Will the angels look biblically accurate? If not, I’ll make a magical girl that can transform into a Seraphim-tier biblically-accurate angel.
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Hidden gem alert...Quite an interesting start...I am hooked up to the story...It may be my speculation, but I believe that it would become something in the future...
Hello! I haven't finished reading this book yet so I can't really say anything about how good it is but as for now I'm really liking this idea hope you don't drop this
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I come across this story by accident and I said...why not? is just 10 chapters,I have nothing to lose.And how happy I am for reading this story... Yes,is short so what... Is a beautiful story.I don't know who the author is but he is a very talented one. I hope I can read other stories of him/her.He is very good. Keep up the good work and I hope to continuing impress us readers.
this novel sounds good but it needs a lot of work for starters needs a world background i got no idea where this novel is star wars world? i was thinking that at first but MC has got space marine class star wars has no space marines maybe if this was war hammer 40k dawn of war then sure but nope other then that story needs some work too.
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This is just personal preference, please don’t take this as criticism on the work.I like this story, I really do. I have some issues with the way the characters are written however. So far I’m at chapter 26. The main characters are cold and unfeeling to the circumstances of the other characters. Quick to resort to the idea of killing other characters before they can do anything wrong. Now this wouldn’t be too strange, but these people were literally highschool students before transmigration. My last issue is that the main characters don’t treat the other side characters as “human”. I know that sounds a little ridiculous considering to them they literally are characters from a game they played, but it’s not really a game anymore. Maybe this changes later in the story but for now it’s really off-putting and I can’t bring myself to read anymore.This next part is criticism for the story. Please understand that this is not malicious. I do wish that the characters were a little more fleshed out. I understand that some parts of a story are intended to be intentionally vague, but I don’t think it works that well for this kind of story. The main characters feel 2 dimensional, like they’re lacking depth in their reasoning. My last criticism is that there is a weird amount of plot convenience. Specifically, the part where it talks about Nathan being an experienced person about knife combat. There was exactly no hint about that character having the experiences of someone who needed to wield a knife in the modern world.Now since I have criticized the story I feel the need to completely certain aspects as well. This is a 4 star review after all. I really enjoyed the concept of this story. The world around them was not really fleshed out that well, but it was written well in the parts where there was World building.Anyway, I hope that you continue writing stories. I look forward to more of your works.
NOVEL IS TRASH I JUST WANTED TO RIGHT A DECENT REVIEW BUT WEBNOVEL DOESNT LIKE ME AND WANTS ME TO RE LOG THERE GOES 1000 WORDS ONLY WAY TO ENJOY THIS BOOK IS IF YOUR DRUNK ITS UTTER GARBAGE
NOICE, hopefully you keep this novel going consistently, wish you all the best so you don't drop it. 140 Characters is a stupid thing, this is a fricken pain in the ass AHHHHH