Nice! Tell me how it went
I remember reading this as a novice novel reader and being confused as f*ck. I only survived to ch 26 because I felt my spiritual space cracking.
Lol
Awwww such a cute ending!! Won't say it was absolutely amazing or the best qt I've read, but no doubt it was quite heartwarming and fun to read
Luo Feng isn't merely a main character. He's a supreme being and this is just a part of his legendary stories. Luck? Everyone have luck, none of the supremes lack any luck. All beings have infinite energy bodies, multiple one of a kind treasures, unbreakable wills, unique cultivation paths. None of them are stupid. A mere swallowing beast is truly only above average, able to make him lead for so long. Top bloodlines? That's only what mortals say. There's a reason why humanity became a pinnacle race with such low beginnings. How are they different from the rest? Why are they unable to die? A teacher passes the fire to his student. A treasure is for everyone to share. A belief taken to the ends of existence. Immortality is common, power is limitless. In the end, authors are human and so, humans are always the best. Racist? A solemn teenager who never played games. Weaklings only focus on other's flaws. He's merely proud of his country. Next, he'll be the pride of his entire human kind.
Mah boy. I have 4 years reading novel and im lvl 23 currently.
I can call my self the so called "experience reader". Can i?
And let me tell u that, none of us "experience reader" dislike this novel.
Before the great wipe incident in this page this novel was filled up with the so called "experience readers".
And let me guarantee u that at that time the comment section was a whole 180° different to it is rn.
Bc nobody waste time acting like they r some soft of ultra-pro author to judge this novel.
The more u read, the more u realize how excellent is this novel.
It has nothing special, predictable, yes, but it successfully does what 90% of the other novels cant:
It has a great story, its a rushing story but u doesnt rlly feel rushed. Except for the ending.
It has no significant plot hole, contradiction. It has a great logic. The author didnt bite more than he can chew.
So in conclusion. It doesnt do anything outstanding. But it doesnt F*CK UP either.
Which put it in top 10%
no h*m*⚆ _ ⚆?
Pathetic Cultivation speed junior.
He looks way more finer on the novel cover than the manwha lmaoo
Damn this shit is good. At first I didn't understand why there was so much hype for a novel with a little over 100 chapters ( as at time of writing this) but wow. I'm hooked. This is a great read. The pacing is good, the characters are fun and the plot is developing steadily. I'm just sad that I discovered this too early and now have to wait months to let the chapters pile up.All in all 8.5/10
it's nice, some mistakes but I mean who doesn't. Try proofreading them. a little bit too fast paced. but overall, good story.
Writing Quality: 4/5
It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue bothers me because I don't know who is talking.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I give that to everyone
Story Development: 4/5
Good plot, although it is more descriptions and less dialogue. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing.
Character Design: 5/5
Not bad, I don't have much to say though.
World Background: 5/5
Extremely descriptive, doesn't live anything out on how the world is.
Keep up the good work!