Tbh the story itself is fine. A chapter took many part but the contain is short, it is killing me. That make me didnt want to read anymore. Just take your time man to finish your chapter. I doubt there is 5k words.
I liked this book quite alot I'm hoping to continue and can't wait until you make more
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Its no surprise this series has the reviews it does, but i am here to top it off with saying that even at 24 years of age having grown up on dragon ball, naruto, yu-gi-oh, pokemon, gintama, and so many other great anime that wouldn’t all fit here— this is still a top 5 series in my eyes. All there is to say ,I need. More. Chapters. (Iykyk)
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honestly i don't really do reviews but this is a story i have passed reading multiple times due to no reviews but damn this story is just getting better and better the more i read
Beginning of the story is typical. You can say cliche :D It's ok, these kinds of novels are fun to read but I am concerned about many things. I don't see any errors in grammar. (It might be a problem that my grammar isn't that good either.) I will continue to follow the story and update your review.Good luck! (The rating is temporary. I cannot really rate if I have only 3 chapters. It's like judging the book from its cover.)
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Stop it. please, Don't do this. This is just below the belt.many of readers here knows and followed one punch man. please stop this.s d s
This book was one of my all time favor ites
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