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This is the kind of top-quality novel that shines on WN. Action, adventure - horror and mystery, all wrapped up in a system architecture with a transmigration to boot. The author immediately makes you feel the risk and danger that the hero is in, pounding into our minds how cheap life is in this world and the sacrifices and hard work people have to put in to survive! I can't wait to read more!
It is a really great story, way deeper than what you could expect at first ! I'm kind of disapointed that we don't know that much about the other characters of the story, aside from Zombie and Cranberry... but, I feel like it is coming ! Also, I find it hard to imagine this world being the set up for an otome game (I don't play those king of games but don't they usually happen in schools so that all the capture targets can be gathered in the same place more easily ?). Every other aspects of this novel are just incredible especially how well written the relation between the two mc is ! And, I'm so affraid for Zombie ! it is clear that the role he has now isn't what was meant for him and it will have lots of consequences on his personality as there is a lot of clue that can let you believe that ! This novel should have at least 1million readers and it is shocking to see that other novels that are way worse than this one have more readers... It makes me a bit sad...
I love this book! It is fast paced and I was not expecting the twist. I don't want to spoil but I really enjoyed Eleand's adventure. Plus the descriptive writing, I felt I have been trasported into their world. ?
Hopefully we get to witness the fatty. I hated the trope at first but now it kinda grew on me.Zhu Bajie(JTTW), Sima Kong(PBS), Jin Dabao(IMDC), Old Fatty Li(RFIW), ect.These bitches grew on me.
This book is one of the best am reading currently, nice world development....amazing MC for a ten year old...looking forward to more chapter and hope for a faster release
In this first chapter you can very easily see the difference in writing ability between the transaltor and the original author. If you are wondering why everyone is confused in this first chapter it's because it is an exceedingly average translation of good prose and imagery. I will give you this that it would take a long time to capture the meaning accurately. But with this first chapter the translator(s) have unequivocally demonstrated that they cannot deliver prose, the nuances of meaning and the imagery of the author. I have only read the first chapter so maybe it gets better with translator progressing. But I for one shall not be reading this any further.
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 27/09/2021 @chap 172(released chap till date: 189)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) SHORT REVIEW: You read Dual Cultivation? Yeah, very similar to that, just a little more drama included and the number of harem is quite less compared to DC, tho the no of chaps are less as wellAnd yeah the story is hella fast. LONG REVIEW: writing: 8/10There are mistakes here and there. Grammatical, Typos and all, though nothing that might hinder your experience. Welp the best thing is author corrects any mistake whenever pointed out, so yeah.update: 10+6/10^ If anyone read any of my reviews previously they would know I always want 7 chap/week for 10/10 rating. This one releases minimum 14 so a +5 for it.^ Another +1 because author gives extra chaps when PS goals are met.plot: 7/10^ This one is a good time pass read. For harem suckers (like me) this one would definitely be good.^ -0.5 because sometimes you might feel plot jumps from here to there and it's so fast it's difficult to comprehend^ Another -0.5 because there are some scenes which might trigger readers. That's not me because I read pretty dark $h!t. But others would be triggered. As I said this is an unbiased review so everything will be accounted for.^ A -1 because of exaggeration. For ex *spoiler* Mc is a clean freak. But his girls somehow messed the room. Mc founds out and he gets angry that he threatens to kill them if they don't clean his room within an hour or so.Some might say it's a joke but it isn't because mc can resurrect them even if he kills one.And I'm saying this might be said as a joke, but it's really a bad humor.*Spoiler end*characters: 8/10 ^ I like the characters here personally tbh. They have their own quirks and personalities.^ Then why -2? First -1 It's mainly because how fast women fall in love with mc. Now I know this is a dual cultivation novel but since I have this criteria so...^ secondly, another -1 because how no characters have any character development. But as I said this is dual cultivation novel so just -1. pacing: 7/10- Honestly, pacing was pretty fast. dialogues: 9/10^ mostly all criterias this time got 8 huh. Welp tbh the is not a realentertainment: 9/10 Now this is a biased criteria. This is solely based on me. And I indeed enjoyed the novel? How much?? I had to stay awake at night to read this one (since I'm pretty busy during daytime.)Overall: 4.6/5~4.5/5 (WN rounding up)CC rants:-There are some extras which I didn't mention above... Or didn't have the right criteria so here it goes^ Firstly I love how author uploaded girls pics during their intro which most authors do not do. They always ^ Author is interactive and replies to as many comments as possible. This is also the reason why author knows any mistakes he made in a chapter (typos, grammatical,etc) and he corrects it.^ *spoiler* Now this is amusing but the cultivators not only have western & jap name but also wear modern clothes. Yeah modern...*Spoiler end*^ And..... That's it. Keep uploading ?CONCLUSION:A very good fun read novel which uploads twice daily. If you're a fan of Dual Cultivation, heck, if you're a fan of harem genre then do read this!!!!And author-chan don't forget to pin this xDWARNING: *SPOILER*The start is very similar to Dual Cultivation. So if you ain't a fan of DC then don't read this, since it would be just a waste of time.
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A very nice gamer book. Almost found myself in it while sleeping I thought I was one of them contractors.. Though some typo errors could be encounter, its the story itself that brought spices.. Its nothing more than an rpg,felt like the author is a maniac or just addicted to guns.. Just the overkilling and bruttality that makes me cringe sometimes.. Overall, good job!!
