The story is awesome and very relatable for our age. I hope there will be more character development. Will definitely recommend to others who like the same genre.
I read the first twenty. It is okay. Would read more. Currently would not pay to read more. Might be good, might be a shield girl clone. Need more chapters to decide.
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unsatisfying. I've now read 250 chapters and while i really want to like this i just don't. the last 150 chapters left me in a perpetual state of annoyance. we have a very cool set up, the first 100 chapters are well written some pacing issues but nothing deal breaking. The mc keeps getting into impossible situation which means he gets absolutely trashed, he does manage to make it out alive but you never really get this satisfying pay off, additional there's no real rest between one catastrophic desaster and the next. As a consequence it often feels like the mc is power less and even in situations where we could get some satisfying comeuppance like with the scamming information merchant we just move on. another peeve i have is that at some point MCs brain goes afk and we have to deal with the consequences for the next 100 chapters. all in all very unsatisfying but sadly not bad enough for me to put away immediately causing me to waste too much time...p.s if you want to read a story with these flaws but on crack give stygian diviner a go you'll hate it
Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!Great till now please read 20 chapter before u decide to drop!!
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This was pretty awesome for a short story. I would love to read a world based from this. Good job. Nice background and storyline. Fights could use a bit more gorey details but it didn't detract from the quality.
seriously dude if you want to copy a Hollywood novel you should do some novels that people haven't really read yet but,really are you for real copying one of the most readed and famous Hollywood novel " I am in Hollywood " and you can't even give a proper translation, Mtl has better translation than this........
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Writing my first ever review for a book at Webnovel.To keep it short this novel made me as hooked as ISSTH by ErGen to the point that I spent money to catch up and but privilege.I am usually shy, but I felt maybe to you the person who bothers reading reviews I can give you a very small personal checklist that this novel completely covered for me.1. Char development is fantastic..not just for MC but all characters that make appearances, as they are relevant to a good degree to the overall plot.2.The love interests are not flooding the story which I appreciate ( although I wish we have atleast a couple more).I don't like novels which have MC interacting with 12 girls whom I don't care enough about later point in time as they don't do enough for the overall plot or are just too repetitive in what they do.3.World building is exceptional.. without spoiling too much for new readers I wanna say you are in for a treat there is a lot author has already planned out and teases us occasionally about the Big guns in this martial universe that he has created.I am so excited about that.4.MC has a good head over his shoulders and I like that he is not over the top smart and he has room to get stronger and be better too.Would love to see a side of him when he can make a blunder by mistake but that's just me.Over all I am happy.5.Story is at a very good pace and I wasn't able it put it down since I started.There are so many things I probably missed mentioning but for me personally it's my top 3 novels of all time so far and gives me ISSTH VIBES ( please note I am not saying it's a copy or similar just the way it made me feel as a reader and kept me hooked)Zeus you are writing great stuff take care of your health while you keep making high quality chapters for us fans :).Looking forward to the Saga of Shun Long