Seeing his fast movements, the lady sends her flying swords towards Cyrus as it tried to impale him at subsonic speed, however, Cyrus who's master on sword arts and trained his reflexes and senses to the extreme, he deflected all subsonic swords by smashing it with his sword.
Praising himself that he was able to find a cheap Affinity Ball, the old man quickly explained to me what it was and what it could do.
(It will not stop him, but he will certainly weaken him.)
However, he wasn't the fourth wall type, and the chances of that happening were slim. So, he just hoped for a harem, and looked down at the paper in his hands and sighed.
The sword was the straw that broke the camel's back. As soon as Tian Zhe saw it. he started struggling madly while crying in plead.
The next day, the army marched all day long. The invasion's goal was an old human city, past the desert. After making it there, they would rebuild the defenses to make a fort, which would be the key to future endeavors. Of course, the Dragonborn wouldn't let them have it their way. The various clans would elect a commander in chief and raise the army before long.
ty for the fast pass nothing against your book
Spring Autumn ? Cicada ? the author is playing with fire I see. LET ME BE THE WITNESS !!!!!!
This is a rather dark and gore-themed novel. it even depicts various causes of death from various monsters. So far till chap44, nothing much was revealed for real world setting. it takes more of an approach of arc-based storytelling for each dungeon. each dungeon have their own small world settings. character wise, I would say beside the sister wang, others character clearly portrays how human stab each other in a desperate situation. and this novel does portray deep biased and double standard of huaxia dragon country. so while I want to give justice saying author is Chinese, so obviously he was biased, I have to agree to others saying this novel is racist. Can't really say without spoiler, so I leave it at that. plot development was good but really slow as it tackle the struggle in each dungeon. 40 chapters=2 dungeons=around 2 days of time (excluding the timeskip waiting for next dungeon). because of this, there's pretty much nothing to gauge the quality of the novel. and from the looks of it, it would take 200 chapters before we can even properly evaluate whether the plot was good or not.
I recommend this novel it has many interesting aspects The writing quality is very good and easy to understand Story development is great you are seeing their adventures from the very beginning and it's rich with events , the fighting sequence is great and realistic with lots of effort in it .The character design is just perfect , the character's actions reflects their personality for an example Jaxith personality he's a good and friendly with Irene but he's brutal and show no mercy to the monsters , he just treat them as if they were his prey and he's their predator . The world background is also great and full of mystery and lots of things to discover.The only thing about is the stability of the updates usually the author write two chapters a week but sometimes he write only one ,but he's still puts a lot of effort in his work and i like it so i'll give him five stars for it ,he's a new author and he need some support after all!
Alright, decided to review as I've gotten a feel of the story and its direction a littleThe grammatical errors dampen this novel a bit, nevertheless it's readable and the plot is interesting. The few chapters that I've read have been good despite the errors. English isn't the author's first language and considering that, the author has honestly done a good job.My advice would be to find an editor to help you with this as it will go a long way in adding more life to your novel. Besides that, the development of the story and the world building has been beautifully crafted. Hope you keep on writing and getting much better, this novel has a ton of potential. I'll be reading and showing my support author.
Ok so far but the grammar is horrible. Not for people who hate bad grammar