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Uncle Feng Dai leaves the room and closes the door behind him. Only when the door is fully closed does Ying Yue start refining the pills needed to both increase her potential and cultivation. The next day all herbs had been used to create high quality pills for her to use with the help of her knowledge from her past life.
"You dare to daydream when im talking to you!"
"Erm… I….I am not sure Professor Harry could you give me some time. I might be able to remember something…"
[Shadow walk activated], the monotoned system sounded in his ears, [Do not be detected or your cruddy disguise will be found out. Its not like it won't happen anyways though]
"Are you seriously using such a childish way to decide on who gets to eat seconds? Just how immature can you all get?" furiously asked Mikhail.
Good, it's just the Chinese names ruined it
Raw?
This novel should be removed. It's almost been over 2 months. Even novels that recently appeared are still getting higher votes than this novel. I will vote for every novel that is not this novel because the longer it stays here, it's cheating the system due to how long it stays compared to other novels. It's obvious that the majority of readers don't take this series as something great.
I usually don’t even review.. so takes mine as gospel ?Jokes aside. So far so good definitely seems like it’s finna have massive potential and a huge world.. so look forward too that.. Also Fox is actually one of the few decent writers on this app. Especially when it comes to making a true villain like character.. I would also recommend you read his other work Now I’m not gonna lie if you don’t like true villians, and I’m not talking about those fake villians.. this story might not be for you cuz Fox makes his portags extra extra evillll ?
the writing is good and the plot makes you have clear understanding of the story. It's not my type but I'll probably keep on reading this
I decided to re-upload the review after reading more chapters.good novel a tragic beginning which creates empathy for the reader, endearing characters. But also excellent update stability.But I find this novel quite childish, the first chapter shows that the mc is a bit naive. It's weird because I'm used to cool, cruel, ruthless Mcs.As said in the other comment, there is a lot to improve.Ps English is not my mother tongue so sorry for the mistakes
looks interesting I will give it a try ❤️❣️
