Omg I love ? this book sooooo muchI'm still reading it and so far I'm more and more impressed by the author ?......Honestly speaking,I love the creativity and diversity of the story and plot....✨?✨It's refreshing to read this masterpiece....Keep it up my boi??
This is a intersting story from what has been written so far. I am intrested in what will happen next. What I say is my opion and suguestion to help your book become better so please don't take it the wrong wayFirstly for me, It was not scary. When I read Horror/Thiller books with are nomarly Steven King. I want to be right there with the MC expericing the horror and the diolage that is written now if given more details to the world and the backround to make me feel like i am there can work. The chapters that you repeated the same dilolage twice is a clever use of diloage and can be used if it is altered in such a way that it is from the other persons perpesive. In genreal this is a good book and has the potional to be a great horror book " If you want to be a writer, you must do two things above all others: read a lot and write a lot" Stephen King
This is a great novel that shows a lot of promise. Hopefully the authors don’t screw it up later on. Hopefully this one doesn’t get dropped and I’m actually looking forward to where this I heading.
Unique card world simple in design but fun Very game like Im guessing the arena stuff is lEague if legends inspired and seemEd very interesting
(español) una historia muy buena, el suspenso uff 10/10, es material para una buena película. es bueno darles oportunidades a nuevas historias y esta no decepciona, espero que siga con la misma calidad! buen trabajo del autor!!
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Its pretty stupid, but its honestly really entertaining
MC is basically a side character in the 19 chaps weve read so far.
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Expect a protagonist who treats men with disdain and practically worships the ground women walk on. I wouldn't be surprised if this author was a feminist. All hail the mighty XX chromosome!
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Seems to be a good novel. But not my taste. I found nothing original in the plot. Mc's incessant screaming and reactions and those capitalized words kinda put me off. I don't know why but something just feels off about this novel. I just felt like skimming through chapters without actual reading in details.
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