RegisEon
Cool title sheet! The first chapter is thorough, better than the previous chapters in the novel I read earlier! The first chapter of her presentation is fascinating! I'll add my resume when I read more chapters! But it is clear that the author has worked and, moreover, well, the introduction, it has become more interesting, from the first chapter, a new style is felt! And it's great !!!
Time to thicken my skin, and toot my own horn! If you're looking for an epically-scaled, breathlessly exciting, impeccably written Eastern Fantasy/Xuanhuan/Xianxia novel, you've come to the right place! No, no! Don't press the back button! Ok, look, if that's not enough, how about, an adorable loli sister? No, you swing the other way? What about a really, really cool senpai with silky, long red-hair who can kill thousands with but a gaze? No? Okay, I see you're asexual. Oh boy, you're gonna love this, I know what gets your rocks rocking - an insane plot, a sick backstory, realistic characters, fancy weapons, an adorkable pet sidekick! Still NO!!? Bah, I see you can't be saved. (But seriously, this story is gold). Well, if you're seriously not interested, I still encourage you to give this a go. If you love it, that's another thing to look forward to when you wake up in the morning! (If you hate it, please PM me, let's talk about it so I can become a better author!) Cheers
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Very good read for someone just starting out. The chapters are well thought out and the wording is great for a novice. Keep up the good work and keep this book going! Look forward to more from you!
Agaxent of symbianize
A lighthearted and funny novel, I’ll even rate it withh TSS in terms of potential…this novel is the best trial read in this batch by far. Hope this gets picked!!!!
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The story is fantastic the background , translation and characters are dope. The are many ideas the author singles them perfectly with atmost creativity
There are too many cliches in this story. Cliches used to be something good when first used, but now they are just the same and not unique in some way. I could only force myself to read up to ch 10 and here is what I have to say.1) The MC got some sort of bloodline power from his mother who also got kidnapped.2) The MC's dad used to be a genius and then got crippled so both are treated like crap.3) Of course, the MC has to get bullied because he needs trashy cannon fodder enemies for the beginning of his journey4) The old weak useless caretaker also just happens to have a little girl that is just a year younger than the MC and she ends up being taken by someone related to the cannon fodder that the MC beat up I think you all get my point. However. Unique things this novel does. The little servant girl isn't some unsurpassed jade beauty. The dad gets killed off lol. Oh yeah, I forgot about the friend that the dad had who seems to be OP, but for plot was never able to help his friend and his friend's son. What a shame.It's so cliche it hurts
Sorry to say it but it's ALWAYS the same story in Chinese novel.It's filled with cliches and here we don't have anything new.If there are people who like this kind of novel please answer me because I kinda don't understand how it is a top novel within webnovel ranking.
This series is back. And as I said earlier as well, it's a great and refreshing read if you're sick of the usual cultivation stories full of Chinese propaganda...It's literally the only webnovel that I've actually paid for (only because I thought it was gone forever from WN)Considering everything, it'll probably take a month or so before I can begin reading this again since I'd already started off with the paid version... (While the paid version is 40 chapters ahead, this one has real people joking and reacting to the story) If you don't try it, you'll be missing out on a lot...
This is a very bad novel as a whole. Why? Because this is the meeting point of 2 previous novels, WDQK and BTTH, with their own cliffhanger. Instead of developing the world setting using those 2, the author developed a whole new setting instead, making the whole thing more complex. I don't mind if the author can handle it but he couldn't. Incoherency is very obvious when 2 of them begin to converge with this and the 2 MCs from those 2 novels is just like your mob character with less luck than MC even though the reintroduction was grandly described. Even more annoying is what were cliffhanged at those 2 novels aren't explained in here either, merely showing the aftermath. Therefore, I conclude this as badly executed/planned novel. It'd be a lot better if this don't have any connections to those 2 novels and could be a decent novel as a separate universe. Less hype, gimmick, and drama.
