Good story idea??. I hope you will make the king more ruthless ??to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior ?️?️personality also not only scholarly ?u200d??u200d?type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power
This story started out quite good but it keeps having the same problem. Everytime something is supposed to be bad, there is needless r*pe, unrealistic and non-sensical trauma, or ntr / ntr-adjacent content. What was a decent premise and strong story telling is being dragged horribly down.I tried looking past it as having been on the platform for quite a long time I've gotten used to reading Chinese novels which are violently racist or likewise have one-tone r*pe characters, but this story and writer keep hitting you over the head with it over and over. Only getting worse arc after arc.As a side note, this novel has a worse take on homosexuals than most Chinese novels, a genuine feat.
great strart .. great flow.. no over description, plain fun and fast .. interesting power ... hope to see more ......................................
Hope he wouldn't just get all those God-Tier skills from the start. Too OP makes those skills not precious and boring, because there won't be development for the skills. But, at least he's not Thomas, or Johnson, or Bick.
not sure why this story isnt more popular. one of the better FL stories. strong, smart, funny, cute, and not constantly in need of saving. world(s) are interesting and, while the cultivation/portal setting in not original, there is enough uniqueness to make the story stand out. characters work well together and are fun to read about. there isnt much character growth. mostly becoming comfortable in their own body. but the leads are strong competent adults so not sure they really need to grow. it mostly just fun to see how they will react to changes.no crazy plot armor or last minute saves by the heavens. just competent people accomplishing their missions. which is actually nice compared to every minor outing turning into a world altering cataclysm with diving treasures popping up left and right.plus if nothing else, the mc is a bloodthirsty, cute, wolf girl, who dresses like a pirate. with walking nuke of a mage as partner. that alone should be enough reason to read this.
Honestly this book is a disappointment to me personally. It is way to slow for this type of novel. He unlocked his powers but doesn’t fight for almost 15 chapters. He doesn’t tell anyone. Makes no sense and is horrible written. I‘m sorry but this novel is to slow for anything enjoyable. Who wants to read the man character get bashed and then do nothing for almost 20 chapters. Lame asf. Not a great read.
very nice
I love the power system and the world and how everything blends together but I gotta be honest and say it's a school and assassination novel I see no development with side characters or any real assassination don't get me wrong I love the story alot you just need to development what you set out to do good job so far I'm looking forward to see how this book turns out in the future
Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Bad translation. Low intelligence (mc).Low effort webnovel.
why do I feel this novel is also going to be held on just like other novels for the sake of maintaining high energy and not updating new chapters...WN is literally becoming trash day by day
Only the synopsis and already he and she are interchangeable. It would be foolish to take this seriously when even the TL doesn't.
Shameless review from the author here. I made this review so that people can ask questions here. I also inform you that I am trying my best to write this novel as cleanly as possible but as my first language is not English, There are chances of mistakes happening here and there. But I am trying to change that. Constructive Criticism is welcome but know that this is my first book and mistakes will most probably be made