ProfaneImmortal
it might be a good story but the translation and grammar is too badcouldn't read at all
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
story falls in line with usual second chance vrmmo stories. the writing and overall story however is quite good and enjoyable.only real downside for me is the grammar. it reads barely any better than a machine translation. if author could get a editor to help with his grammar this could easily become an amazing work.if you are interested in this genre of fiction I'd recommend adding to your library, checking in every once and a whole, throwing a stone occasionally, and when author finally gets an editor you binge read this like there's no tomorrow.
I picked this book up when it my boi Han was just leaving for space and that was arround chapter 300. Thinking how the autor posted about a chapter a day means that this book has been in that making for a little over 4 years. This book was with me through high school and it feels amazing to see it come to such a great close. I hope the best for the author and translators.
zero creativity, rinse and repeat, generic tropes, lot of plot-holes and plot-armour, useless MC, brainless and foolish MC, .......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried.I am still dipping my toes into the literally fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesn’t. Books like these are definitely my cup of tea.This book is like the dystopian Lord of the Rings, with its richly developed culture and economicsAnd also the supporting cast of characters is excellent.Please update more author.
Overall it’s really great .Really recommended it’s not unique I mean there’s a lot Novel that has similar to this but this one It’s really captivating. The world background are really explained well you’ll really know how to imaginary the how things work.character and mc all great there’s nothing much to say ,you can tell when you read it it’s really great especially the characters it reflect to mc’s actions if they are trash then slaughtered if they fine as gem then he take care simple as that.progression or development is really the main factor about this story it’s not forced and had way to much progression which is good since it’s not that had much fast pace also not slow as well . Overall its enjoyable.
This martial arts novel is so enjoyable, each technique is so powerful and cool !! So astonishingly. In addition, the action scene is a super great part of the story. I think many people may like this kind of genre because it is easy to read, it also has lots of action scenes and the background of each family is so clear (which there was always a reason behind them). Worth to read!!!
all i can say is awesome and good/incredible
It's not bad nor good. Well if you are looking for face slapping, then you might enjoy it. I hope it's not harem but I think it probably would be.
Man why did i discover this gem of a novel so soon i wanted to take my sweet time with this but alas now i have to wait for chapters like a peasant.
The story is interesting, I really like this story. It is worth waiting for the continuation of each chapter....................
