How is novel outside of time
the first system novel I read good one don't except any plot..
Overall, good story. A few flaws, though.
Most obvious one, MC doesn't one is on himself enough. He actually let's other people get equipment he can use. He really needed to be more selfish imo.
Yan Er was extremely annoying an hateable, I really do think the story would have been better of without her.
Ending was extremely rushed, but the story was repetitive, so I can't say much to the author deciding to end it early.
The game stats are fucked to hell. You want me to believe the MC is killing a mutli hundred billion hp boss, when his weapon has a like 400k atk on it and 3.8 second attack speed? Also, one small thing on the author's math, how does 200k + 200% = 2 million?? I'm so confused, I understand he has a whole bunch of buffs on him, and strength, but it's stated some buffs don't multiply together, so the author's math is just ridiculous.
For the love any god you believe in take your head out of your ass and look up reincarnation. When you die and wake up as someone else that is TRANSMIGRATION!!!!! Reincarnation is when you die and are literally pushed from your mother's body being REBORN into the world
I don't understand the logic , mc born wastelands helps the elysian and he feels upset cause hells army betrayed elysian when million of life lost cause of him.
This Li guy is so annoying, hope he isn't the ML.
it will definitely different from other Kingdom building novels .you should try it .
Interesting character. A bit too simple, but his funny.
OKAY, it seems my journey ended here. Thank you for the story. I guess I don't have a choice but to accept it since I don't like your decision. It was very enjoyable to read. Thank u?.
So this has some huge amazing upside as a fanfic. Its an amazing story about an op player who is white which is awesome as you dont see alot of all around dominant white players when u talk greates its MJ labron kobe. But thier are now glaring plot wholes coming. one is instead of having to fight players hes having to fight refs who are allowing him to get hit with flagrant fouls. That would not happen NBA wouldnt allow it. if he got a carrer ending injury that would mean losses of millions if not billions of dollars in potential revenue. Not only that but it would also mean he can sue for hostile work invironment i mean the NBA is his employer and they are allowing him to possibly get injured. thier are smaller mistskes like NYU not having a D1 gymnastics team. his girl should have gone to cornell that does have a good school and D1 gymnastics. I havent heard him mention the players union or anything.
A fascinating read, world-building, and the description make it feel so realistic and the quality of the writing skill is really good, great job author. It's a read i'll recommend
i'd say it has potential, especially since it is a sequel to Wold's Apocalypse Online. please continue the translation and please for the love of flying spaghetti monster don't drop it.