The author creativity and jokes lot of them are new, the only problem here is the lack of reviews!!hahahaHere catch my 5 stars review!! Here catch my 5 stars review!! Here catch my 5 stars review!! Here catch my 5 stars review!! Here catch my 5 stars review!!
While the story is held back by strange word choice, minor plot holes, clunky dialogue and foreshadowing that makes no sense until the pay off, The grammar is good for the most part, the characters are unique and the general premise of the story is good. One of the better web stories I've read in a while.
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Aurther san.. great novel.. but need more chapters... Please........................................................................................................................................
TRASH I recommend you to not read this book. It's a copy of of the novel "Online Game: I possess a monster merging simulator". I mean LITERALLY excluding the different names this novel is a copy of "Online Game: I possess a monster merging simulator"
At first the story seems interesting but the more you read, you realize that the plot is just follows the same old sign-in type novels routine.
I read the mtl of tge story. Story apparently ends a little over 500 chapters in with an authors note at the end, the ending is definitely meh with the story basically dragging in the later half due to author losing motivation and creativity. The final fight is just mc suicide bombing his opponent twice then grabbing his family and after that an authors note where he says he lost motivation for continuing to write it and as an answer for the questions he rose in the story to try and motivate himself it becomes a yah sure he did it…
MC is a sweet summer childe and not too bright. Nonetheless, as with all Qidian MCs, he gets a hax to carry himself through life with little effortsMC is a sweet summer childe and not too bright. Nonetheless, as with all Qidian MCs, he gets a hax to carry himself through life with little effortsMC is a sweet summer childe and not too bright. Nonetheless, as with all Qidian MCs, he gets a hax to carry himself through life with little efforts
Grammar are bad and the plot feels so wrong on many levels. No proper explanation on cultivation levels what so ever. So many loopholes as the story goes on. I tried to endure reading until i can't take it anymore. Gonna drop this now. ?
Overall the story is good, the MC is interesting because of his background, but there are a lot of characters that are important besides a few. There is always updates happening so you don't have to wait long and the grammar is good, the world background is important because of the mc and him trying to find out what happened. so overall the story is good, but it can get a bit boring sometimes, but it usually so the plot can progress. There isn't a lot of fighting, so it's hard to know how powerful someone is exactly. So like I said the story is good. GOOD JOB AUTHOR!!!!!
i like it truly and using earth academic systems and rules to establish a sect while i have an idea why don't you have him eastablish a flying island for the sect after studying profound sky ship since if he wants hid land of beyond the heaven at least his sect land can move too well no ofense but sounds cool where he fight the world suddenly an island appear to smash them ha
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