Like the story so far let's hope the keep it and update it regularly. Has a interesting version of cultivation rankings as well as a good mix of technology. will be interesting to see how the continue to mesh.
Recently picked up thos novel, i thought it was really good however has this novel been dropped? It hasnt been updated in a while. It would be a shame if it did.
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I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author.With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.
Great novel. Lots of interesting plots and characters. Great ? job author ? and thank you for your hard work and time to produce this art ?
If this doesn't remind you of "My Vampire System" you must be crazy even the start is basically like a copy (in a good way). Its kinda funny 5 star.
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I love the storyEvery twistKeep up the good work!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????✊??????????????????????????
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I've seen this on Twitter as soon to be shooting. When I searched a little, I found that this was written by the same person as MDZS so... I had to read it. The story is quite nice, flowing full of realistic human emotions and struggles.
This book is a very interesting one, but with good writing and story development. It keeps me intriuged as I continue to read.
A tale with an interesting premise: If you never give up hope, you're likely to find a way to solve your problems.The writing is solid. With good character and world development delivered at a steady pace.The foreshadowing hints at exciting events in the not to distant future.Can hardly wait to read more!