wonderful read. cant stop reading this once you start.
Really great book! It's easily the most intelligent story telling I've come across on this platform. I find this story, for most parts anyway, very compelling. All lovers of sci-fi should read this...Word of advice: Save ss and chapters for binge reading. If you don't, the cliff hangers might frustrate you.
Although words can't do this work of art justice, I absolutely adore this novel. The best novel I've ever read. The story is very well written and the characters are not one dimensional. No problems with grammar or writing quality. World-building is great. The innkeeper system concept is very unique. No problem with updates too. It has been very impressive so far and definitely will continue to be. Make this a very long novel please author-sama. I'm also abhorred by the number of people who've given this novel a rating lower than 4 stars when I noticed people who've given bad reviews haven't even read all the unlocked chapters. Some haven't even started the novel, so ignore those reviews. Btw you're definitely missing out if you're still reading my review lol and haven't read the novel yet.
Its CUTE and Funny??? The MC is absolutely adorable!!! And its nice how the ML isnt like a huge age gap and Pedophile.... and its not like the FL and ML have huge mental age gap either! Since ML is a regressor!
This book is amazing so far.I am excited to see what happens next ??
I have only read the first couple of chapters, but I want to say that I had been a very enjoyable read and I hope you continue to upload. Great Job ?
this novel made me speechless and i think it's a magnificent debut go on buddy!!!
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Absolutely One of Best Novels I have read ! Writing Quality and Plot is amazing with so much to look forward to ! MC is OP, awesome and Gorgeous Girls with original, interesting characters. World Background also very good put to visualize environments. Action also very detailed and exciting to read. And of course Sex Scenes The Best and Very Enjoyable to read ! This Show Must Go ON !!! THANKS!!!
Good Vocab, with a nice beginning to the story, can't wait for more updates, updates are also regular. Pacing is managed well as well. Hope the author keeps this up routing for you!!!
I think the story is quite good but feels a bit forced in the early chapters, i would've liked more explanation as to what has happened or is happening.The chacters at the start didn't have enough time in the story for me to connect with them, its like 'hey heres your 2 siblings and mother, they're dead now' i hardly got to know them and didn't care about them enough for their deaths to affect my reading experience :/
Let me start by saying I love the writing and aspects of the plot. However, the whole plot feels like the a strange mix-mash of two different stories. Im not sure who the MC is on one hand there is li xiang the chaos butterfly with a tragic past and a charcter i’m really intrested about. She looks like she has a layered backround and a cool set powers. On the otherhand there is her brother? I think. Who is just bland and arrogant and just kind of annoying. It feels like you as an author are trying to link these to stories together but its not working please focus on one charcted it would be best if that character was the chaos butterfly in your title. Apart from that I really hope you expand on her past and I loved the whole cultivation system much more original than other webnovels. Keep it up the story has lots of potential. For best results maybe rewrite aspects if the story focusing on li xiang starting with her intial rebirth? In the immortal world and slow down the pacing of her getting that power. ?