I hope this gets picked, it's really great and original. I love the premise and the MC's character is great.................................
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So far so good. The author delivered what he promised. The amount of worldbuilding is put into this is very immense. I am very curios of the world. And the plot is greatly paced too. I hate slow paced, so this is like the best fit for me. The downside is the number of chapter. In time of writing, it only has 10 chapters. But will definitely support this story so it can continue
really good book so far definitely deserves way more attention and love them it gets. wouldn't be surprised if this novel eventually blows up.
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The main character does not have any cheats except for his memories. He will change the plot. He makes mistakes but learns from them. He is like a back ground character but he is strong. He cares for his friends and is loyal to them ,his friends too are loyal to him. He is loyal to his wives to and says his dreams to them. One of the best novels I had the pleasure of reading.
The author writes much of the story in passive voice. It makes it feel like you're not present for anything. We don't experience the story though the narrative POV, but we're told it in the most boring way.
There are inconsistencies with the narrative distance and focus. For instance, sometimes you get told how someone else thinks, despite it not being established its omniscient POV.
One thing that bothers the most is: What is his motivation?
If the goal is to do a vlog, why does he do it? Money? Its clear vlogging becomes pointless after the first 20 chapters. So at the end of the day, the idea behind this story is a cheap hook to get you reading. Then it turns into the typical wish fulfilment trash.
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This is me, the Author.
So this will be the 102th review.
Holy Sheet, I never thought I would get so many reviews.
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Well, so I don't have much to say, cause I am of course, biased, for me, my story is definitely 5 stars.
You can read other reviews.
I am only here to increase the review count of my book, (Yes, I am greedy.)
This can also be treated as another question-answer thread, since there are already 60+ replies on my previous one.
Ask whatever questions you have here.
I'll answer them as soon as possible.
I wish you a happy reading experience.
hmmm with how the story started off, this I presume will be a very Romantic and interesting novel, I write and like novels full of gore, but this one-time I liked an 18+ novel, keep it up author
really guys?? no RAW?? .................................................................................................................we want RAW.......