Reviewing for FP. Keep up the good work.
I don't think there is much to say besides thank you. This story is very entertaining and I look forward to following it till the end.
A good attempt at novel with Indian history. It leaves much to be desired( beware I am comparing with some of the very good novels on this app) but none the less an entertaining one. I would have loved it more if it was more detailed with clear show of hardship rather then a smooth sailing in start. Anyways good luck for your novel I appreciate the effort of more Indian content.
Definitely is a novel of a much higher quality than other novels. Im 100% looking forward to where this goes and to the day this novel appears as part of the top 10 novels.
The story so far has been very engaging and the premise of the protagonist, Yun Lintian that "supposedly" reincarnates without cheat powers is very interesting for an eastern fantasy novel. The author managed to keep us enthralled by dropping hints about the protagonist's mysterious past and hopefully, future "cheat powers" which the protagonist so comically complains about not having so often. The protagonist, being an avid Xianxia reader himself has entertained us with modern jokes combined with "fourth wall breaking" within his inner monologues, has never failed to leave me with a chuckle. His well-written character development gives you an insight into how really each person’s relationship to him is, to a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them.One can ignore its minor grammatical quirks, as this novel has impressed me with how well written it is as an original novel, and with its world-building and attention to detail, it definitely made me feel as though i was reading a translated Chinese novel. Its in-depth plot, pacing, interesting characters, and especially the very likable and smart protagonist leaves me with an impression of: "This is a quality novel".This is a great read overall and I am looking forward to the unveiling of its mysteries, the protagonist’s future development and his connection with the other characters. This is a Xianxia novel with abundant potential. Keep up the great work author!
I had high hopes but I've been let down completely....bland chicken for 10 silvers and MC is like my stuff is way better so I can earn more then proceeds to sell his stuff at 3 silvers for the magic restoring potatoes which can easily go up to thousands of silver coins which he should know
This is was somewhat decent but still trash. The plot is inconsistent and non existent at the same time. For instance mc, who is a max lvl player, was almost killed by a starter lvl boss. How that even possible, only the author knows. Plus judging from the horrible plot and it's flaws, I can tell that this is a copy and paste of someone else novel.
Its nothing like the other novels by writer idk what made him Drop one of the best novels on this site to upload this ? like come on can the readers catch a break ?
This story isn’t anything amazing, but I found it entertaining. There’s a lot of action as the MC is very proactive, nothing like the low-key MCs. One of the other reviews was strangely fixated on the girl next door, who was literally only in three chapters before she’s taken to a safe location by her dad and disappears from the story. She plays a very small part in the few chapters she’s in and there’s nothing inappropriate in them at all. Her role is basically just to highlight the effects of the spiritual awakening on even just kids. The other reviewer just seems to have a dirty mind bent on finding things that aren’t there. ?One complaint I do have is the system doesn’t really seem to be an AFK system? It seems to activate every 12 hours regardless of what he’s doing. Even when he’s fighting in the wilderness for days, it activates every 12 hours without fail.
frankly , it's a really good novel and it's obvious that the author definitely has some knowledge and an interest in wrestling. the way the mc is portrayed is very realistic and I like how everything didn't just fall into his lap. The novel is definitely one of my favorites
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Great story with solid writing, an intriguing story, amazing description, and interesting characters. I think the writing is solid, with a few minor things that could be changed (some paragraphs should be shortened). This is definitely worth the read for a different type of story to enjoy.