It was a really good story and i am eagerly waiting for the next part to come as soon as possible and just keep it up like this writing good stories which make a really good time pass
This is a story about an absolute idiot.This is a story about an absolute idiot.This is a story about an absolute idiot.This is a story about an absolute idiot.This is a story about an absolute idiot.
This novel is awesome, I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work..
It has a very good writing quality. I love the way you added elements from Bleach.
Nice novel so far, the characters are well designed and the plot is nice. The only problem is the update stability ? pls author try to fix that ?
I personally enjoy this book as it takes a new spin on the topic of reincarnation, Murim and power fight books. It has puzzling mysteries and lore hidden deeply within every chapter. I would recommend this to anyone who loves Murim novels or Manhwa's
It's my first time reading a novel like this and I wasn't disappointed. The writing is clear and straight to the point. I could follow what was going on so great work.
I'm gonna be true about this review.First the writing quality: 3It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.Example:The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)Updating stability: 5 updates a dayStory development: 4 its good for nowCharacter design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support
I love this book and I love how the ideas come together to give me this Joy and flow. I love the fact that It's as though I am watching the story rather than reading it ???
As someone who has read most of the sports novels on this site, this is original among them, not only that but a system that is balanced unlike (All Soccer Abilities are mine!) This system flows smoothly and the players growth can be explained well. Characters are good, each one has their own personality. MOST IMPORTANTLY, the novel isn’t hard to read, there is no such thing as toughening out some chapters because every chapter is engaging, and finally, I waited a while to write to see the update schedule, and happy to say a good amount of chapters every week. Love it so far. Read it!
this title remind me of "I own a virtual universe
Nice story and over powered characters , looks we can look forward for so much story plot with action. Good Mix and Great work Author, Loved it
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