I will (most likely) update this review if my opinion changes — not too far in, but so far, promising story and am liking the world building. Plus, detecting some DnD-inspired elements, so gotta love that lol
giving my self a shameless 5 star review just wanna let you guys know that this novel gonna be free for always im more happy to see willingly donation and have more readers i will put patreon link later for your support if you liked this novel , there is about 200 chapter ready but i will just upload 10 each day as we reach there and in 300 chapter this story will end but it will have more than 100 chapter of side stories , wish you a happy ride on reading this novel i put my soul into
This story is actually pretty great and the grammar is fine unlike other douluo dalu fan fictions on this site. There seems to be a plan and it updates at a decent pace.
I love the way you telling the story, detail 'till I can imagine, just from chapter 1 is very interesting and made me wanna read other chapter. Keep the good work!!
It's a good story with an interesting plotline. The story development was pace rather slowly, but it suits the plot well. Every scene was unfolding with a good description, and it was well detailed. There were just a few grammatical errors, such as the misuse of pronouns. It's minimal, and I think that this story would develop better.
I do not know how to write a review but I just like it :P I have been gone for a lil and I am back since I looked from my history hope more people will read it but this is probably a bad review this is mah first review so don't expect much Gl author and hope you continue I may come back hoping for updates XD
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Novel has potential. Currently, I am on chapter 53. But no matter how I think about it, it feels like the novel is currently lacking something. Perhaps you are introducing character too early. Or the readers didn't have enough time to connect with the characters. For whatever the reason might be, after you introduced other character POV, the novel feels kind of bland. There was this one novel I read 3 days ago. And after reading 10 chapters I was hooked up onto it. In the case of this novel, it didn't occur. Kind of feels like I am forcing myself to read this. Sorry author, but as of now I will drop this. After the novel crosses 100 chapters, i will return again to binge read it.
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The plot is unique and amazing. I'm excited how will the story will turn one. Although it's a little early for me to give my review. This story show a lot of promise, so i'll give it a 5 star as show of my support. I hope a lot of people can read it. Continue writing. You have a fan in ne
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*click* this is going to my cringe compilationThe story feels like written by a person with chuunibyou. I won't say that it sucks but it really is cringe worthy. The awkward moments are really awkwardly delivered to the point of cringe. I feel like the author is putting his/her delusions in this novel (no offence peace!!!). I love comedy but I want logical comedy. The scenarios are really full of plot holes I won't even call it a hole anymore. If the illogical scenarios are part of the story well sad to say it fails to deliver. I'm having goosebumps reading this. And you can get really tired with face slapping. But I like the writing quality little to no errors and it's readable. Well that's the only good point.