I love this story, the plot and character development is all on point this is definitely getting a spot on my collection. Keep up the work! Please update more!
If not for my persistence stalking the horror section I surely will miss this hidden gem. The story is good, the author really have a way with words, the description of what happening is really vivid I am glad I don't read this while eating. And this is good, really good, way better than the opening of all others z movie that I have watch and I have watch a ton. It is really unique in how it is all started from one tiny little hole (no pun intended) in the security (*cough* shoes) and all hell break loose.Take this solid 5* from me.
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This read was engaging and quickly grabbed my attention from the first chapter.the character "colonel" is well described along with were he is. I'm always up for a good mystery so your story is definitely going in my library!??
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To describe this novel I believe it would be accurate to say it's the equivalent of eating a frozen meal from the dollar store long after it has passed its expiration date. The MC has less intelligence than an ant and balls smaller than a hydrogen atom, want a little more detail on these descriptions? He hunted level 1 rabbits until he reached level 14, he didn't use his AI and failed to properly utilize his advantages by either forgetting to activate or deactivate said advantages. To top it all off while he was leveling his AI helper, instead of leveling her up as he leveled up he felt he needed to wait until he could just mass level it up to where he wants it. That's just the tip of the iceberg as well. Somehow he meets a woman who magically falls in love with him after hearing that he literally hunted rabbits for the entirety of his existence, he let his mother name his guild some completely idiotic name, and he is basically on the hit list of every powerful organization except for the strictly neutral organizations like merchants or town guards. He's essentially protected by plot armor the whole way through and the villains are so one dimensional that you can almost predict the entire story line. Considering there are other free novels which are far better than this, like there are better options for getting food than buying some television dinner from the dollar store, this novel probably isn't worth your time.
The story seems fine. However, despite my vast experience reading poorly translated/trash novels, I could barely make sense of what was going on.
This particular literary work got me intrigued and i enjoyed it for the most part. The only one that i don't like is that there is no real threat for the MC as his companion can literally fight a god and the number of people than can remotely threaten him can be counted in two hands. However, i really liked how the world was built and how it was the game that he made and at the same time it's not.
Hi everyone, time for a shameless plug of one of my stories. GnG is essentially part two of TAP and the story continues to feature the Riley family with QJ being the MC in this story. Many new characters will be introduced and we will revisit some of the old favorites. Please read TAP before you go any further.
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