Really tried to hang in there until the grammar got "better" at chapter 18. But it didn't... well it's less cancer than the earlier ones but it is still cancer all the same.
Story wise it's your run of the mill trash mc becomes strong novel where he uses a training method no one else uses because it's "painful". Mc also has a supposedly "trash" monster companion that's a mutated version that'll in all likelihood turn out to be some hitherto unknown high rank monster that no ones seen before.
On a side note: might pick this up again if editor gets his act together and fixes the chapters in the beginning, cause no one wants to have to wash their eyes with bleach after reading this novel.
it could be a good story if the main character was not acting like a monkey all the time, he is pushing around and just when you think he is going to be a man he does everything his wife's family tells him for what? to be treated like a liar, a cheater and fool just so his wife might love him for 5 sentence and then be a bit*h to him again and again it's boring and stupid.
This author could have invested half an hour of his time with any form of make believe study (like google search for example) to learn a little about what he wanted to write about. At least, and even if you are completely BSing us, you could try to justify a little what you are saying and please you also could try to assume that the readers have at least a little of intelligence or knowledge.
Sorry but i don't have time to read more than a few words. I have a much more satisfactory thing to do: to take a dump.
from this novel I learned how to be pirate
so when there is premium novel with the paywall, I can use another pirate sites if I want to read it :D
this is a very good novel don't drop it the mc is not stupid and is actually smart and its hard to find story with good mc like this so please don't drop[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
good translations. not offensively bad but offensively boring. the whole cheat is really boring, uncreative and soulless. the worldbuilding doesn't exist cuz it is unnecessary. it's a cultivation world, unless you've never read a cultivation novel you won't be bothered by this at all.
my only gripe with this is that it is again b o r i n g and uninteresting. 2/5, good translation but I don't recommend this, dropping at CH 18.
Hello everyone, this is the author first of all giving herself five star because why not?
So, I have had a lot of complaints about errors in the book. Gramatic and spelling errors to be more specific and I have decided to do something about it.
I'll be edited the book chapter by chapter for spelling and errors in the grammar and the app I'll be using is "prowrittingaid"
That also means that I won't be uploading any new Chapters for a while
Thanks for reading this book up till now, I hope you can wait till I'm done with editing and not just trash it cause I'm not uploading new Chapters.
Until I'm done editing, have a wonderful time.
Love ya all
I absolutely adore the story. I love how funny and immersing the characters are. I especially love the interactions between the MC and the butler. I simply wish for the other chapters to release soon.
Good novel for continue reading plz read the video for enjoy ment and review the novel [img=fp] plz add this novel in your library comment on this novel for any issue
an intetesting story indeed, just finished reading thr chapters and i must say they are all well described including the characters for me this story deserve a 5 stars will add this too on my collection to be updated!
Great writingIt's a wonderful book for those looking for African novels with a bit of fantasy.I can't wait for the next chapter to be uploaded.??
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