Love the story so far I just don’t understand why people have not read the story is great keep writing it will catch up soon
First.. since my mother tongue not english ...so you will find some grammatical errors ... But you can skip that ... The story will gradually start to improve after you get to know the world ...and then we'll get into the original plot ... I have a fanart About the characters .. I don't know if anyone needs them? I can post them in the comments Or can I make an Instagram account or something like that?
Would have been better to have more world building and character development. There wasn't really much anything from the novel that he got reincarnated on.
There will be some "Author Note" here and there in a middle of a chapter trying to explain some things, better if it was integrated in the story rather than posting it.
I'll be shameless just this once and rate my own novel.
i really love the characteristic of mc and the fmc and the story is good/awesome
Shameful 5 stars!
Though there are only 6 chapters, I think I should at least give the first review to give a general idea for dear readers!
Welcome to the unholy relationship between a priest and demon~ It's a bit of a slow burn so things won't be developing fast between our dear lovers, at least not in the first volume!
Sadly, I don't have much to say because I don't want to spoil it for you, but I promise you it will be a fun ride hehe~
Thank you for picking my novel & I hope you will love it~
Book is trash. Having MC being a wuss that he can't say no to these women is the worse. They need him to pretend he's with them so he goes along with it. Give the man some backbone to draw a clear line between these women who pester him all the time. It's annoying and repetitive. I was fine going on the hunt but gosh man can they just leave him alone and stop asking him to take them everyone
are you sure mc was a top spirit master of the world?or maybe he was but just got there because of his master as i cant imagine a person with such a brain becoming an expert without dying 10 times just because he underestimated everything,i am at chap 63 right now and in just 2 weeks mc has at least underestimated 5 things which all end up being biting him in the back but he is just so arrogant that he does not even want to acknowledge his wrong but insist that everything he did was right and just kept underestimating everything again and again,i think it would be better if you started the story with a different style like mc coming from earth and getting ONLY knowledge about manuals and future or something else which would atleast make sense that why mc just want to underestimate everyone and everything,i does not used to like the mcs of other chinese novels because they are arrogant but atleast they never underestimate there opponent or the intelligence of others as the mc of this story is doing,he took my understanding of peerless expert to a whole new level.please change the plot device as it is a great novel and i see a lot of potential in it just by reading 60 chapters but sorry but i cant imagine mc ever being a top expert with his current mindset he is more like a little kid that got knowledge of manuals and future events and thats all,this should never equate to mc having more wisdom as he seems to have a lot of battle experience not life experience and does not know how to handle people without looking down on them
The sanctuary is bigger than i thought it would be?
Great novel ? good humour.The story is very dark. hope the author has not abandoned it yet?This novel seems to not have been updated for some time.
3 Stars for Writing Quality. Primarily due to translation. I have no opinions regarding the original text but the translation could use some improvements.As for the others, it's the cliche plot but here I am. Kinda dropped it midway due to how the 6th sister's (who is clearly a child) prospective husband is an adult (a friend or was it a relative of the ML). I don't mind huge age gaps under the condition that whatever emotion bubbled up was after the younger one reach adulthood. For me, this is a bit too much even when under the consideration of the world background.I picked it up again for some binge reading but I still really can't get over the child and adult romance going on. Def grooming vibes going on there.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................