Wonderful. I shall start the new journey then.
Much appreciated.
Thanks for the recommendation..
Then how would one truly appreciate a novel by doing that?
Worst novel ever read. Translation is very very poor. So many wrong grammar. Whoever translated this must have used an app translation. I wouldn’t believe a translator or author with such poor english grammar skills. Poor plotline. Story flow ridiculous. Characters are not impressive. I can see now why it stopped at chap 83. I stopped at chapter 8. The poor grammar bothers me a lot. I tried brushing it off but if it exist in every sentence then that’s too burdensome
Bro I'd take you for it, I hope you're right.
I'm at the 10th chapter now. So like, Maybe tomorrow I'll be in 30's. 50's if I'm hooked.
Leave it to toika to have novels I can read without feeling forced to carry on.
I'm fairly new to writing novels, so there may be mistakes or inconsistencies that I haven't noticed. But I'm doing my best to improve as I go. If you have any questions about the story, feel free to ask, and don't hesitate to share any feedback you might have. Constructive criticism will really help me grow. Thank you in advance for your interest
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engages I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
Love the story so far and I am goddamned excited to see what happens next!
Also chapter 5 ???
An interesting concept. I'll keep it in the library to see where this goes... ❤️
Don't mind me. I'm just here to shamelessly rate my own novel 5/5. Thank you! ?
I felt like stellar transformation has a stupid ignorant mc especially how he readily ignores the girl ( i dont remember her name ) odd points and clues that signifies that she is at least from some super big deal clan that put his to shame and acts like the hero that saves the girl all in all i didnt like her addition to the novel it was fine and dandy when he was alone she is just too much baggage and trouble to push the plot forward