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This is a really fun novel! I just started reading and, whoah, how come an hour has already passed? :) It's this type of feeling. The author has the best sense for coming up with good story bits. The characters are fun and charismatic, and the situations they get themself in are truly entertaining. There's room for improvement in terms of grammar, but it's really not that important since it doesn't take you out of the story. Great read!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
It shows that the author isn't a native English speaker. Too bad, I would love to read this kind of story. Maybe if the author got himself a good editor could this story be salvaged.
I really enjoyed reading this. You know, some stories just talk for themselves and this one here is one of them. The characters, plot, and even the writing is wonderful.
The writing style is good, the characters are appealing. Liked the events in the first chapters and eagerly waiting for more!
Grammar good and regular update schedule.
I think that you should work on the characters backstory and make them more fleshed out and more real, the world building is great and keep updating
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
this novel is good writing isn't bad either and i also find mc a idiot for not making use of the future knowledge he has. this is very slow paced (I don't know if I'm the impatient one here) those who like romance type of novel should definitely try to read. and I hope to author to make mc little more smart.
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this kind of novel with light taste kinda good, i pick this one to ease my sore mind after reading hard weight novel that need too much thinking. please pick this one editor. cant wait to read the next chapter
Its completely ridiculous I love it