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Now all that's missing are an underwater survival and a surviving in a backyard after being shrunk version of the copy pasted hint survival craze going around.
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Nice starting to the story. A very new concept to write about. Interested to find out the journey of a ring. Do check some grammer mistakes and use apps like grammerly or proaidwriter for help if needed. Be more stable in the updates
Definitely a story with a heart. The MC has a very tender, painful backstory that will tug at your heartstrings. Her parents are just amazing though, I must say. The MC herself is very well portrayed, actions are congruent to her age. Her innocence also comes through in the writing. The writing itself is very good, only minor tense issues that do not take away from the story. The emotional core of the story is what hooks you on to it. Thank you, author. It will remain in my library as I look forward to reading the entire story. Great work!
An interesting mashup of Saw meets Agatha Christie meets The Weakest Link. A few grammatical errors, but I'm curious to see where this goes.
I was warned but didn’t listen? the quality of the trial read books seem to have gotten worse and worse and now my expectations have dropped.
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
I like the way you wrote it, it's very clear and easy to understand. after all this novel is promising story. I love the characters and looking forward to them. keep it up!
No doubt good story potential but my man get a editor or someone to check your grammar. That is the biggest weak point of this book. But other than that keep it up.
World building takes time and effort, something the author clearly did not want to do.If there was a negative star rating for totally failing as an author this one would deserve it.
Cliche story with lots on inconsistencies. I dont know if the inconsistencies are due to translation but the novel feels like it was written by a 12 years old child.