firstly it start off grate but as per each chapter it keeps going downrail and funniest part is that it's still in the early Phase if its so bad at this stage then what do you expect in the later phase ?
Unfortunately the novel ended at chapter 67. Short, but good. Wouldn't mind buying the chapters because the writer is Old cat.Hopefully he will write some more new content. Maybe try something like pokemon?
Wow! this feels unique. I like that the early chapters evoke the feeling of hate and anger.The author has to make some corrections here and there to make the reading experience enjoyable.
This book was intended for a new study of a little better or I would be able nothing more to say about it than I am so far from where I was going to be in my own mind
Needs a lot of work before it can be called good. The sentences are barely readable, there's too much shifting between POVs and the pronouns character go by is never consistent. As for everything else, they're decent at best. The pacing is all over the place, the characters feel two dimensional and the romance is way too rushed.
great novels like this deserve more attention. please don't drop
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