best story 10/10 just needs some dialogue fixing and spelling mistakesalso monologues are too big and author gets distracted on each monologues but it gets better
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Website : qidian china Views : 9.53 million Rating : 7.9(1083) Chapters : 942Status : completed Word count : 3.38 million author rank : great
Just the first chapter and im already god damn confused. Stories written in riddles from chinese context has lost a lot of the content's meaning after translation. I dont see any point wrecking my brain just to enjoy a novel. ?
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The quality of the writing is good but the plot is basically not there. The main character also seems to be a bit of a sociopath he has no regard for anything and seeks chaos at every opportunity. He also treats the women in the novel as things to look at or accessories. There's alot of improvements that could be made.
I enjoyed how the mc is low key but at the same time he is now a beta mc. He is very assertive with what he wants.Another point is the world building, i loved the world that the author build. It’s a mix of Japan and UK.Just one point, I would like to recommend the author to explore in the future movies companies too.
Im readi this novel for the first time, it’s only a few chapters… rest have been taken down for updation. So far the writing is good and story is interesting..? I’ll be reading further to see how the story unfolds.. keep updating..
Hey, there. I'm the guy who's translating the work with the help of the editor. First, thank you for all readers' support. Will humbly accept all the criticisms or suggestions. I will be more careful with the translation quality and try my best to make it easily understandable to most readers. Hope you can enjoy the travel of cuisines.
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