Great potential.. keep it up!!!.. the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story.. Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
The protagonist asked the beautiful lady if she wanted some fuk. The beautiful lady said yes. Thus, there was some fuk....,,,,,,.......,,,,,,......,,,,,.
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This story is rather interesting. I don't remember reading this kind of story where another character transmigrates instead of the MC but the cover is misleading. If you don't read the story, you won't really know the entire idea of the novel just by looking at the synopsis either. The translation is ok, not the best but neither the worst, and the cover...I'm pretty "inpressed."
You have got a kind of imagination that I can ever not imagine. it is good.' to my thinking, you should work on your cover nothing else. I have started reading the novel by its synopsis will go ahead.
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At least until chapter 5, which are the chapters that are when I am publishing this, the novel is enchanting me.
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I really hate this story, it doesn't make any sense for example the best vr company make game with tutorial that don't teach any thing mc get bad titles from tutorials because he can't make good items,it have ai that don't help any how just tch , he see world boss in beginner area and he kill it with luck but story say he have bad luck, like how? Kill the crafter after making some beginner item? It doesn't make any sense, he make item that break the game and game company say he come for deal What is this game? Just for grave and shovel he obliterate a dungeon?IF YOU WANT A STORY THAT MAKE SENSE DO NOT READ I REPEAT DO NOT READ
I hopE that at some point in the future we can get updates again i was really starting to enjoy the story and then the updates just stopped. please Author I need to know the rest of the story.
I'm sorry, I really tried to enjoy reading this novel. But the quality is really bad. I feel like my neurons are committing sepuku as I write this. Please find a proof reader first of all.As for the story, nothing out of the ordinary at least up to the I read. And that is the first impression.