This was painful to read, arrond chapter 100 it become machine translation and it get worse every chapter with no editing whatsoever. I manage to last until chapter 188. Maybe the story is interesting, but I will never know.
Predictable and cliche. If you are expected real character then you better look somewhere else. Even had the cliche scene of entering a store like a broke person then showing up some randoms that talked trash for going into the store. Like I understand it's modern but why does everyone talk so unnaturally. ugh
I really like the theme of this book and the characters in this book and i dont fInd antrhing wrong with it its a good book and i think it has good character development.
Was interested during the first few chapters...But then the forced nationalism started and it keeps getting worse.Does the author get paid for this kind of nonsense? It's ok if there's a bit nationalism when the situation calls for it. Now it's just irritating..
Honestly, author just **** up this novel. So many messed up profesionist. I mean cultivator why dont stick to path of cultivator, MC just turned into card wtf was that. And honestly mchine gun? Boxer? How can they fucking strong, and what kind of reain they did to become strong? Spirit enery? Mana?. Oh btw MC habe War God system right? Why dont depend on it to become god?
I won't complain about the spellings and all, overall matter is the story is hilarious .Continue with your stories. I can't wait for more.???
All the world building and mysterious of the story loose its lustre because of MC.Mc is too blunt. He lacks uniqueness that makes a main character.It gets irritating when he cant even use his brain for anything.He is always like '"what do i do senior?". "should i speak senior ?" everything that he do, thinks all came from senior(sprit in the ring)I get it author said, story is slow-paced but this is too much . After reading 150 chapters i can say MC develop from naive idiot to brianless puppet
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Very catching synopsis. I'm definitely sticking. Lol.
The use of language is really great ? the cover itself attracted me and the story made me fall for it??its really worth a read?
It's not Peter, it's Perer. Haha this remind me of the day you corrected my mistake too about the name. I love his Sister, his Queen. This is great!
im really enjoying the story, but i think the story with luca and ariel is lacking