DammyDimples
If you look at the comments on this novel, it shows 2 people who love it and 2 people who hate the info dumping. IDK if there really is that much info dumping and I personally haven't gotten far into it.
Hello everyone! I hope you like my new novel and enjoy reading it so far.
Let me know how you feel about the pace so far and any feedback is highly appreciated!
Best regard's UndeadSoulUltra.
The number of plot holes is insane. The Harem is disgusting, its basicaly a "meet and f*ck" for the protagonist. All characters are mentally retarded, except the mc whom has a intelligence of almost avarage. Somehow, the characters are said to be millions or even billions of years old, but act like children and commit mistakes that teenagers wouldnt. The plot armor is absurd, the protagonist farts and such fart end up unlocking a heaven defying opportunity (he actually encounters so many that they simply lose meaning). The power system is basically whatever the author wants at any time, because he can just keep altering it as the novel progresses and doesnt care about inconsistencies. The story in the first and second world he visited is "ok", but afterwards it becomes tiring with nothing new added to the table, but the author doesnt care and wants to milk it as much as possible.
great read
Loved this book
very good book
I can’t put it down!!
second time reading this book
kept in collection. good story
A book I loved and hated in the same time. So worth reading it! I miss your stories author.
it is a very good start to a book except for the fact that chapter 12 repeats itself four times in a row and it charges you each time
just started this book. But very intriguing. I am enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work.
