Qiu Yue then quickly made a group chat on QQ.
No, this couldn't be true. It shouldn't be true. I couldn't accept it. I couldn't mentally comprehend the fact, that I am the son of the manifestation of chaos. I am the son of the one who caused everything that was going on. Oh no, I am literally, the descendant of the Devil. I am… I am… I am Jens.
'BANG' A tiny green orb entered its chest at a high speed.
The ice shells rained down on the cliff, Hisako's legs getting encased in ice alongside the trees as she failed to move out of the way in time, falling face-first onto the ground with a grunt of pain. She hurriedly brought the pommel of one of her kunai down on the ice, making a large crack down the middle and allowing her to break free on her own.
colbob:like i sed i can kill you first before you use that
The worldbuilding in this one is absolutely superb. The whole stats thing, special hidden skills, abnormal growth rate, explorers and the MAZE remind me of Danmachi a bit, and I absolutely love Danmachi, so that's a huge plus. I love the intricacies with the attributes and how the skills interact with them. I also love the concept of the three heroes and the almost religious air to them. There's just so much good about this novel I can't really list them without this review getting too long. Hera is an amazing, relatable MC who has very subtle character development. There's a ton of stuff you can infer about her just from the way her charisma stat makes her "prettier" to how she folds under pressure and doesn't think to redistribute her points before leaving. There are a good amount of grammar errors, most of them being with tenses (using past tense and then switching to present for a sentence or two) but everything is still understandable and since you're a non-native speaker it's fine. The story is still very, very enjoyable. Your writing is descriptive and I can envision every scene. You also have a unique writing style or aesthetic that makes MAZE a real treat to read. Definitely an underrated gem. Will be reading more!
"Understood" Pietro said with a stern voice, but his eyes were filled with unspeakable bloodlust.
I’m really liking it so far and looking forward to mor! Added to my library.
There were people who don't like this novel but you should give it a try you might be the one who will fall for it.Above all you should give it a try.
Dang!! this is some good stuff...I read it till ch20 and got to say this book has potential.. The writing quality is good (with some minor grammar mistakes here and there but nothing that major),the story line is also good(not like those generic book on systems),can't say much about the character development ,as this is still the initial stages of the book..Overall this is a good start for the book and hope it is still good on the later part of the story. I highly recommend it..
Writing Quality: Author vividly describes the scenes that had taken part in the novel that will allow the readers to fully immerse within the world of the novel. Definitely excellent writing quality!Story Development: Author used the system cliche very well to make it intriguing to read that wouldn't bore out the readers. Also, NO HAREM!!!Character Design: Three words- Not Beta MC. Do I have to elaborate? I think not. We readers already know the importance of the mc not being beta.Updating Stability: Author updates daily. What more can you ask for?World Background: A bit of an info dump at the start but the author was aware of it so he didn't made it too much of an info dump and prevented it from boring the readers. kudos to the author!Overall: A must read! The fact that the MC isn't Beta is already one of the best thing about this novel. And... NO HAREM!!! Hurray!!!
it is a good story to begin with.keep going, author!hope you will keep updated every day.this is a review, and the quality of the author is ?