One by one, they anxiously tried to get Melissa to respond.
i got bored so i made a world like them and this is that we all raced
WRITING QUALITY 5 STARS: I just can't spot some errors in your work, IT'S PERFECT!!!!!STABILITY UPDATES 3 STARS: Released Ch1 on the month of July and the latest 19 hours ago. The release is not steady. STORY DEVELOPMENT 5 STARS: In the first Chapters, there's already going on, since the plot is unique, the development in this story is refreshing... I just crave for more. CHARACTER DESIGN 4 STARS: As the story goes on, you will gradually be able to get to know the Characters personality. WORLD BACKGROUND 5 STARS: A normal world, no magic or something, just technology. Gave it 5 stars since WE can relate to it. When I read the First Charpter, I added it immediately on my Library.. It is simply promising
Excellent story. The story contains drama, comedy and action.Need to read it, people.__________________________________________________________
This story is amazing. I might be a bit biased as I am always a fan on non-human protragonists, even if they do eventually get a human form, but out of all of them, this one up to chapter 50 is currently my favorite. 6 stars if the author plays up Zion's cuteness more.
This is a truly breathtaking and captivating story. Well done. The world building, the characters, everything is impressive. This story seamlessly blends it's ideas into a fantastic narrative.
Not a 40k story begone heretic; I was so disappointed it was immeasurable. I saw 60+ chapters. I was like potential, but it's badly written. Everyone also knows if you haven't studied 40k lore for like a solid 200hrs, at least just don't.
For me it's better than the top 10 novel, I'm hooked up the more i read this novel I can't help but have a goosebumps always..
I really enjoyed this novel when it was coming out. I think it was dropped, but I am hopping that the author comes back. The story connected beautifully and the writing had little to none problems. The plot is engaging and there is a good sense of humor, too. I come back every once in a while to see if the author has come back and written new chapters.
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I came here in search for the most deserving winner of WPC140 because I participated in the previous one myself, and I'd like to see how well the participants are doing for this biweekly prompt. I'd say, among all entries, this one is the most deserving for the gold tier award. It doesn't disappoint. Writing - I love the style and the tone used for this. It's light, fun, and has a refreshing feel to it. I don't need to stress myself with grammar pet peeves because this has little to no error at all. Very understandable for a casual reader. Stability - very steady, keep it upCharacters - gold-tier description, and they are really entertaining that they hardly make u boredDevelopment - nice, nice pace. I enjoy the comedy and the seemingly easy flow of the story's progression World - vet vivid imagery, keep it up again! Good luck! Hope u win! Read this everyone!
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