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I'm just honestly interested to see where this is going...
If you're bored or stacking, it does its job quite well too.
chapters are quite long, definitely longer than average for most webnovels
I liked all of IET novels but God, he's terrible at timeskips and he keeps getting worse. This latest one, Cosmic Professional Gladiator had so many timeskips and they're terrible. Even tho I liked the novel, it's almost like reading a summary and not a story.
I hated time skip that just goes '2 years went by' like, dude, how many paragraphs are there in a chapter? How many sentences? Break them down can't you. Use a sentence to describe the weeks, paragraph to describe the months. That would only take like 10% of the chapter length but it flows so much better.
Towards the upper middle part, it got so much worse, at one point I think there's a timeskips every 2 chapter and it went like the example above. Even after that, when getting into a new arc and he arrived at a brand new world and new power system and got so much to explore, it literally timeskips in the very next chapter he arrived, that part really p*ss*s me off and ruined the immersion
Ah i see. Thats a dam shame
dude he talking about another point.. that's no need to doing this sh*ts to mc without any reason especially he son of heroes
The early chapters order is really messed up
I dig this!!!! Such an awesome novel
Is this Plastic Memories?
You are exactly right which really really sucks because their magic systems are so intriguing its truly heartbreaking that such good world-building is ruined by unethical decisions
Yo be careful of reading this novel here, I noticed that in the later chapters there was sections of text missing. It leads to great confusion on whats happening as characters would just continue a conversation you missed because the text is gone.
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The novel is good but the translation is very very bad. Sometimes i get lost in reading bec the he and she is most of the times interchanged. The names are changed too. I do not follow at all that i had to go back and see who is yeye or yingluo etc. change ur translator. Its wasting a good novel
