the character build-up is great the only thing to adjust is the world setting keep it up author hehe nicely done on the few chapters tho. Keep it up fighting!
the title doesn't match the story even if match those girl with system is just filler even the world are not written by her sister we never knew who the sister he the one who write the world why just be straight forward about the summary and not destryo the expectations of the readers..
This novel feels more like wuxia instead of Xianxia. Most of us read Chinese novels for enjoyment but this novel offers almost zero enjoyment. Perhaps it would be change in future but so far it's a dull read. The translations are fine but they could use some polishing (Yao race=Monster race. Yao core=monster core).
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First of all I really liked this story and that so called promise of 18+ contents made me really greedy.And yes the story was great, so I decided to read it in the raw.And I soon found that I was lied to, there were no 18+ content even after 150+ chapters and when I found some, it was the same old descriptionless content we see in most CN novels which barely touched the 18+ tag.Then the unsuspecting me was hit with a 1000 megaton nuclear bomb and I died, It was a horror that I tend to avoid like death itself, I found NTR !!!!Yes, it's the same NTR so many of us, so desperately tries to avoid.It went like this, first the deeply grieved MC was alone in the woods, sad and infested with melancholy, then suddenly a 2000 year old causing downfall to a nation Woman arrives ( who is also a virgin) and has *** with the MC, later he also develops some affection to that woman as she was his first.Later, it turns out she was the wife of the enemy king and the MC found them having *** in a cave ( C266) .Some may call me childish, but I deeply hate NTR or anything close to it, what happened to me ruined the whole novel for me.Don't get me wrong, the novel is great and I probably will endure and read on but the novel itself is ruined for me.
Please do not change the country, city and characters names, it only destroys the story!!! Many things that happens in China are simply impossible in the USA, so it makes to story looks like it was made by a idiot.
Massive plot holes that can’t be ignored.Power system makes no sense.WIth a tad bit of the usual Chinese propagandaOverall trash…………….
The MC is already mature. so I don't really get the struggle of MC. But, the MC have unique character so it's interesting to follow.I cannot see the long term goals of MC other than pursue the past love that he lose.And again I just about 40 chapters.So not really get overalls stroy.
Wohoooo! First Reviewer!Why are you reading my review, go read the novel. I promise it's really interesting. This is coming from someone that does not read cultivation novels.Go! Give it a shot! Read it!!!!
At Chapter 617 now. The story is extremely fast pace. Best part is MC starts off at almost the top cultivation level but he is poor. While most authors will create a smart MC that are aware of the other MCs and they will purposely be smarter and have all the lucky items, this MC is different. This MC is just being himself and he is weaker than everyone becos he is a sword cultivator. But that the fun part, he even screws himself by lying often, likes to show off, he hates to be green but he is really a likeable and funny MCs that the heroines really like him and poke fun at him.
Another hidden gem, uploaded silently. Let's see if it goes unnoticed. For those interested, is a faceslap novel, the MC is basically an OP sheltered young lord but ignorant of the outside world, wich makes him decided scape and roamed the world meeting possible followers, slapping the face of the disrespectful and being domineering when the situation is needed so it's funny and entertaining... good for those that enjoyed LoHP, Absolute Teacher, and so.
Writing quality: 5 stars.Very good. Very readable.Story development: 5 starsGood story lineCharacter design: 5 starsLloyd is the best. Second is Null because he is cool.updating stability: 5 stars10 chapters a day. 2k words eachworld background: 7 starsvery good world building. very good magical system. unique too.