Hi readers, Author here, You should give my book a try and try to drop reviews.
Short in action! Too much focus on side characters. This novel is for newbie only!
With these words,he vanished.
up till now is good lets wait for more updates
Feel free to rate and review.Thank you!Had to do this to promote it??????Anyway this is my first novel so there might be some mistakes but although the story is an original work of me.However it'll be kind of you if you will tell me my mistake in the comments so that I could come over it.
I'm gonna be true about this review.First the writing quality: 3It was well performed how you described the setting and characters. However, the way you write verb scenes, such as battle scenes, is awful. Additionally, your paragraph structure was unclear.Example:The beast lunged in his front with its club swing. Victor ducked down under it and dashed forward faster than the eye could see. He tore off both of its legs with a single slash. The ogre fell face forward.,The paragraph itself is fine, but the construction is awful. Additionally, if you consistently use a word like lunged, a new reader will find it unclear (which is you can just use the word hopped, leaped, or jumped)Updating stability: 5 updates a dayStory development: 4 its good for nowCharacter design: 4 since the paragraph structure was bad Worldbuilding: 5. too early to say so just support
Writing a review after a long time. But this one deserves all the great reviews. Binge read this novel and loved every second of it. I hope the author keeps it up and keep making great chapters.Honestly I'm not really a fan of villain mc genre but this one is greatly executed.
I quite like this novel, the way the world is portrayed is fascinating and the characters are unique. I would recommend this.
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i love this novel! it has all the criteria that i seek in my reading list. transmigration and weak to strong, check! and of course the fatty mc, hahaha, i can relate to the mc well enough. Thank you for writing this novel, Author! More chapters please! ^_^
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
Okay here's my view about this book... I read a few chapters and I must say, the book is well written.... I'm a lover of suspense ? and I must say, I got attracted to the book die to the suspense.... kudos to the author for writing out this great novel... can't wait to read the rest chapters