well i have been reading it for some time but Gradually begin to loose interest , i don't know the exact reason just that the story has become a little less engaging , maybe you can try to polish the revenge element more , try some more lemons or just some better character development
I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint
1-79 felt bland80,200,300 onward start to pique my interest.Overall good choice of read. Able to evoke my emotion, but mostly are happy, sad on the otherwise, almost negligible. Need some arcs that would pierce my heart and lasting.
I have read this novel, and it's very good. The mc has OP army from the start and this book is the first novel written by the author and the other two books which have been released, their protagonists are like janitors of this novel's protagonist. The mc is very laid back and the mystery also builds up in this novel. Clearing many mysteries about the Xiling Empire that was mentioned in the record of unusual creatures and the God Clan in the same book. They'll be introduced in this book too and all the Xiling terms that must have been confusing in the records of unusual creatures novel will be made clear in this novel. And yeah Raven was a prototype made from one of mc's friends lol. And apparently the first raven couldn't do anything better. The novel is very funny, plus the itsy bitsy foreshadowing makes this novel much better. And yeah there are some anime worlds like A Certain Magical Index, Rozen Maidens, High School of the Dead in this novel where the mc travels to with his subordinates. And well , fret not they are o nly minor interlude and serve as comedic relief.
Overall I Would say Please Spend coins for just one chap so that you could be counted as someone who has supported the book so that it could be translated. And ask me any questions pertaining to this book as I've completed this book.
A unique and good novel. Good plot twist...weak to Strong Mc...chapters are detailed and no Grammatical mistakes...Detailed background...stable chapter update...overall a very good novel to read
Crap story, mc focuses to much on Chinese toysImpossible to eradicate knockoffs140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters 140 characters
Better be overgeared . Its a proper gaming novel instead i would say story could be better. You may like it for begginer
I should say its nod bad compare to the legendary mechanic keep up the goodwork. Hope you can update more frequently so yeah thats all from me good luck
I honestly can't find much negatives in this novel. The wording is awkward at times but if you just take a second to re-read you can understand what it means.Would recommend.
Pretty good so far the character is pretty powerful but doesn’t seem to realize yet. I can’t wait to see him learn some real powerful spells since he’s already so strong with weak ones. I’d recommend it.
I just do not get it. What is wrong with people and why they always like evil MC. I hate it. I mean I understand that people do not like naive MC and I do not like MC with that kind of personality but there is a big difference between naive and nice and good guy. I discovered that during the past two years MC with evil personality are getting more popular and authors like to write this kind of story who knows what is wrong with people.
Just gonna put this review here.Also, to those who plan to read this, give up, you'll only get blue balled because novel was dropped, author no longer updates it.