It's alright.The main issue for me is the change in writing style. In later chapters it's written in such a melodramatic way. For example a character will be fighting to save a city and it will say, "She must retain her boundless resolve to sacrifice herself for justice. The fate of the world depended on her and she must not falter." Then it will keep going like that for 2 or 3 paragraphs before doing any fighting. It also began to focus mostly on everyone except the main character. It's not unreasonable given the setup of the MC staying behind the scenes in his dungeon, but I liked how Top Tier Providence balanced that better.Except... the other characters are actually more interesting than the MC and his subordinates. Because the MC and his crew become cardboard cutouts who pretty much only say cringe and cliche villain lines.
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it was an interesting read waiting for further chapters and kinda excited to see how this hero falls and becomes a villian keep it up
Mr. author you really need to start improving mc's mentality a little, he's really starting to become annoying, he's often too passive, even if he knows who's targeting him, who's attacking him, he doesn't do anything, because he "respects" the rules of academia, but at one point, we see him more as an idiotic and stupid guy than anything else...Just imagine that Professor Evans could use the being behind her to control the mc, of course I'm 99% that you won't do it, but the mc does almost nothing against her, the worst he looks like a kid when he is in front of her even though he has lived 2 lives!!So far, the fact that he has lived two lives adds nothing to the novel, apart from the fact that it explains the reason for the existence of the system, but apart from that, mc's personality is inferior to the student of most academic students, and it's sad, especially for a novel which started very well, but the further it advances, the worse it gets.
From the trial read I am loving it so far. MC is focused on himself over romance which is a plus this early on for me. Looking forward to more to come. great job ?
A better summary I made for the novel after reading 40 chapters:Our protagonist is an average joe in his final year at a Medical University. One day, he gets lucky and obtains a Daily sign-in system that gives him rewards such as surgery skills, expensive watches, storage space, etc. Simultaneously, he also gets a text in the same day from a girl claiming to be his daughter who tells him the school belle is his future wife. He believes what she says to be the truth after video calling her and noticing that she has strikingly similar features to the school belle. The two agree to team up, and his future daughter sets him up with some advice to woo her mother, the school belle.What he doesn't know, however, is that both his "future wife" and his "future daughter" are two girls he used to be friends with in the past. They are just teaming up so that he can be together with the school belle.
I don't know why people aren't reading this novel. The writing and story a very good compared to most of what I see on WebNovel. I can't say whether the concepts here are unique ,but at least they aren't common and overused, like many novels these days. I wish more people would notice this novel, as I am worried it will be dropped by the author soon due to lack of views.
Name: 重生小说反派公子哥Author: Lv. 5 江湖猫Chapters: 348Status: CompletedMc writes a novel and accidentally transmigrates into it as the villain of the novel, nothing new. I honestly didn’t expect much from this at first, but wow, it definitely exceeded my expectations for this.Translation: 4/5. It’s okay, there are some errors with the names of the characters here and there.Updates: 4/5. What can I say, trial read.Development: 4/5. “...”Characters: 4/5. Although there are some cliche characters, but most of the characters don’t feel too fake and 2-dimensional.World: 4/5. Business companies have more power than the military.Overall, a solid ‘Do The Math Yourself’/5 stars.
is this droped if it is i would like to know coz i realy love this novel?..................................................................................
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La terminé de leer en mtl, conoces alguna novela parecida en mtl para leerla, porque me encantó esta ♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????
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