MC is super cringe!! Its a shame cuz this novel has potential
This novel was an incredible find! I saw some videos about it and despite it initially being a classic reincarnation story, it was the MC's relationship with his brothers and his father that really grabbed me. When they are together everything is much more fun and the twists and the story so far are very interesting.
Although the first chapter left me a little confused, the writing is pleasant, but some parts have no dialogue markings, which makes some chapters confusing. Regardless, I hope the updates come back soon!
Obs: Me and Morres are fighting for the tittle of Nate's Number One Fan (i'm losing)
so far I like the story . such a tight group family
Interesting take on popular premise.
The Main Character is smart and capable. I really like how he looks after his Friends and those he cares about.
one of the best Game of Thrones fan fiction available to read. yes the writing could be better at times but the author himself was honest that he came back to writing after a long time so it's manageable . But by heavens the way the author is building up the world is absolutely incredible
man of culture here
I've only read a few pages, but I'm immediately sucked in! The character exchanges are engaging and don't feel forced. I hope the author keeps putting out more chapters. I only see a few problems, but most authors grow better as the story progresses. Good luck.For me, reading was a very pleasurable activity. One of the best books I've read to date, and it merits recognition and acclaim.
What an amazing and beautiful story. Story is super exciting and does not revolve around the man though the love is incredible. Protagonist has her own world and is full of strength in her personality. Storyline is very intriguing makes you want to read more. Also lots of recipes in the book that makes me want to actually make a dish.
Amazing work. The writing quality is well above excellent, not too repetitive to feel boring and not too "purple-prose" to make the readers lose interest either.The story development is good, with the pace being a mix of slow and fast depending where it needs to be.The mc is intriguing and has a lot of potential. His motivations are simple and plain yet - to become a Magus. I wonder what it'll become when he achieves his current goal.The world, to be honest, is the one thing that has interested me the most. It's vast and full of all kinds of possibilities, and I can see that the author has a vision in its creation.A 5/5 start from me.
So here we have a fairly interesting story though it does have its problems. The main problem is the racism/China good guys everyone else is evil type of mindset. Having that for non-Chinese readers is generally a bad idea as it alienates them. The story itself is rather bland with the police backdrop for the story, though I found that the romance is actually rather fun.So we have a guy who has been sent on more than 100 blind dates by his mother in a relatively short time period. Not really much of a problem for us the readers, but it would certainly be exasperating living through such a situation. He arrests his most recent blind date while on the date which makes him very not excited for any more. Than his mother sends him on another one. He goes into it trying to cause the date to fail, seeing this very good looking girl who looks to be very wealthy he decides to act like a male gold digger. Weirdly she agrees. Her situation is much like his, but he tries to run away from the girl and she chases him down. They get into a fake boyfriend/girlfriend relationship. She introduces him to her parents and he makes a fabulous impression on them. The reverse is also true when he introduces her to his parents. This is a problem for them as they are nominally in a fake relationship.... I love this.
too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
It good