FictionalJack
it has a promising start, hope you continue it. Please update more chapters. Looking forward to what's next.more more more more more more more more
I am very impressed with this novel. The characters are well thought out and I love the fact that, while the mc is becoming powerful, it feels right and it doesn’t feel out of place. The world is interesting and I can’t wait to explore more in the upcoming chapters. The mc isn’t crazy or kills anyone if they look at him funny. He’s a normal guy but very determined and willing to be ruthless as well as merciful depending on the situation. Can’t wait to read more!
Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,espero que continue assim
Quite a decent novel. It starts off with the system being the only sci-fi thing but as the story progresses more things like monsters are added so that the mc can level up, as he was about to reach the limit in the world he was currently in. The characters are well thought out but as time goes on and the battles become repetitive, they become the only interesting encounters present. I do hope this becomes more popular as it is a good read
TBH Who cares where the novel ends up. No one sues those other smaller websites for hosting the novels. Maybe Qidian should ask first but having to stop releasing novels here just because another bigger platform/website is suppressing it is just plain bs. In my opinion anyway.Anyway i hope qidian gets to release all those other novels like MArtial God Asura, the first parts of Nine Heaven (or whatever its called), Against the Gods and many many many more.
The author struggles to make something original so he sticks to the same process of mc gets bullied > mc gets powerup > mc kills the bully > bully's relatives avenges the bullies > mc kills the bully's relatives > repeat. It's fun for the first few cycles, but it gets bland as it goes. Although the novel follows the same progression of "doing something new for a change," it's actually basically just a coverup of the fact that the author is incapable of further developing something thus scrapping it and making a new one, on the premise that the story is "developing" when clearly, it's just making a new slate to follow the same cycle, of which only the names of people, places and realms changed.
this is the great novel actually,hope you can continue write this novel brother ? you're talented and awesome ❣️???hope i become a writer too
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Simply awesome. Powers are awesome. Though having exact number on how many spirit he actually have is better, it make us guessing but does not Remove the mystery. The MCs character is alive, thou super arrogant, even if he's a future god, he is not yet. what good will it bring to humiliate everyone you see and approach you. Treating someone like a person does not make MCs less godlike.Powers are goodWorld development is goodCharacters are mythical,(as in, they act like gods in Olympia)Description and wording makes the fictional world into fantasy.And story actually progress.
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The story is intriguing I like how the Mc and Ml are trying kill each other it is really Interesting and it makes for a really interesting plot. The main characters such as the mains family are a good addition to the story. And BL so read
