Grammerly has nothing on this man, they should be paying him instead to proofread. Bet he has 100/100 on it. Anyways great novel you have, keep going. Loved the daily uploads so far.
I want to start by saying that this is purely criticism from a objective perspective and in no way should be taken personally by the author.With that said the grammar and writing quality is abysmal and needs more work than I could believe possible for a novel with so many chapters and power stones. While the story and world are fine the grammar and English level I think are beyond savaging but I hope that I am proven wrong in the future by a whole team of editors.
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It's interesting the idea.The world is well described and you want to know more of this, the characters aren't boring, I'll give 5 stars, I'll wait for more.