Tirando o fato do Mc ser um virgem fraco e patético, a história é boa, o Mc tem um QI razoável, a contrução de mundo é boa, a escrita é boa, e a construção dos personagens também.Se você não tem problema com um Mc que é mais fraco do que os figurantes, além de ser um virgem com baixo QE. A história pode ser boa, todo cenário da história é boa e a escrita também, tirando o personagem principal é claro.
ITS REALLY GOOD BUT PLZ I DONT HAVE NO MONEY TO BUY COINS I NEED TO FINISH READING PLZZZZ ??
I’ve read into the book a little ways, and have one major concern. Does the author ever find a translator or anyone that actually speaks English to fix this? It’s a huge mess and difficult to read to the extreme. The book has potential from what I can tell, but I’m not wasting my time reading much more than the first few chapters if it’s going to be this much of a mess the whole time I’m trying to read it.
This novel is interesting and fun read since I read the raw so I can say a few things about this novel. The protagonist is the usual transmigration protagonist that get system after certain time in that world and the world background was similar to other novel with modern fantasy taming novel. The story is good and the character was interesting. Unfortunately this novel is from faloo so the chance it got translated is slim still I hope it's got translated.
this novel is nice and story is good too but mc is smart at some moments and stupid at some time.overall it's quite nice I like it. please keep this up author please don't drop it.
This story is incredible. It’s my favorite I love it so much. Walter is amazing and i adore him. I can go on and on about him best MC ever. It seems lately all the stories are all the same and so boring. But this story is so different its so exciting you never get bored.This story has so much potential and it’s so promising and i need more now.
So, I really want to see the SAO anime when I read this novel. But this novel is not about being trapped in a game, but about how to start from zero to fight one's own self. Cool.
So far loving everything. Especially our MC not being stupid and immediately going for the new personality, thing.
Writing Quality: So far so good, I haven't seen any particular big grammatical errors
Stability of Updates: A regular update of once every second day. Which is an easy perfect score.
Story Development: Haven't really read enough to say much about it but I like the build up for upcoming events and such.
Character Design: Best part of the story.
World Background: I have already gotten a great input of multiple different things but not a lot politically, wich is a big thing for me.
So yeah, loving this so far and recommending it to anyone who loves intelligent and scheming protagonists.
Good novel, great story telling. Though seems a bit generic, it still got me hooked. The writing needs a bit of improvement but overall, good job. I wish you luck, author :)
Currently completed till chapter 400 and I just can't stop myself to give a review . I regret that I found such a amazing character like Nan Hua so late but also sad that I will soon be covering till present chapter and torture myself while waiting for updates soon ?. Our FL is everything I love in a female lead . How can u not adore her ! ? And the siblings love for each other warms my heart. The characters development were gradual and I m seriously liking how slowly their progress is described . The world building is very detailed . Writing quality too is great. Novel's Plot is interesting. Especially love the War and politics elements added here.Nan Hua honestly is one of my favorite patroganist. she got brains , she is smart , kind and cute with her thoughts too. ML I don't have much opinion yet , calm ,cool , collected, smiling tiger. He pass as a classic smiling villian for ppl he hate .
I’ve read only until the 74th chapter but really couldn’t read further. The character interaction and development are horrible and it’s hard to find coherence. This reads like someone’s naive power fantasy where everything just falls into place because they have little understanding of other people. The conflict in the story is the MC versus his third-rate random filler character mindset; if not for the fact that there’s no actual other MC, this MC would have long been kicked to the sidelines and forgotten after ten chapters.
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