Please do continue with writing out your stories, You are very good at writing out a very interesting beginning. I wish you were some sort of superhuman to write out tons of updates everyday~4.2/5 solid spelling and punctuation, Lack of chapters gives me conniptions. The amount of details is great.
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I have read up to chapter 8 and I believe it's enough for me to review the novel.Writing Quality: Excellent. The author doesn't use too complicated words but uses words to create sentences that describe the scenes in detail yet not structuring it in a complex way. Easy to read and sentences doesn't break off immersion.Story Development: The Protagonist is a goblin with a VR helmet. So far the pacing is moderately done and the MC started off as a weak goblin which leads to more progress in the later chapters. I can assume that the story will last long for the MC didn't become overpowered at the start.Character Design: The author didn't write the characters as one dimensional cardboards who only speak what is written on the script. You can feel the emotions of the characters such as their frustration and fear depending on what scene was being portrayed. The dynamic between Lucas and Rei is quite intriguing to read.Updating Stability: The author is a monster when it comes to writing words per day. He can write 20k words if he doesn't have any busy works in his schedule. So not only can author maintain stable updates, he even has countless chapter stockpiles that might be released if he holds a mass release event. In other words, updates aren't a problem since author can update daily.World Background: It is set in a fantasy world filled with magical creatures and different races and species. The fantasy element introduced in the world will not let you get bored if you like reading novels with fantasy genre. But since I have only read the early chapters, the author didn't info dump about the world background so I'm slightly clueless of the in-depth world background of this novel. Nevertheless, the world background shouldn't be boring since the author already have written several novels before to know what to write and what not to write.Overall: I can only say as expected of the author. He never fails to write an entertaining novel depending on the reader's taste in novel genre. So for those who aren't certain whether to read this or not, at least read 5-10 chapters. You won't regret it.
A solid read with good written Protagonist lvling System and good flow of teh story not too hurried but also not like DBZ episodes where you have see people get beat down for 40 min too give them a good fight all in all solid fan-fic
I'm up to date at chap 21 and for know well it's in the style of Ero_saint a grzat hentai story with a little little bit of plot lmao.Great story? We are all here for the same thing and well for now it's well done??Keep the good work
I'm so shocked, I was wondering why the writer didn't publish the chapters in Lucas' novel, but in fact he was stupid enough to write a second novel! And a harem novel! Such a thing would only be done by a fool who wants to increase his reading! I can accept that professional writers will write two novels at once, the writer of the descent of dimensions is a good example of that, his level is very good, the plots of the story are excellent, he has great ideas, he is a professional and that is why it is okay to divide his focus on two works.... but the writer of a survival novel The add-on is just a hobbyist! He did something very stupid, if he had focused more on his first novels it would have been better, I'm sure he was arrogant after he got some credit, but he has already crossed the line.... Personally, I am very critical of what he did.
As a fan of Romance novels this is a new experience for me, this story is well thought of and the plot is quite interesting. This is my first novel of this genre and I like it a lot. keep up the good work.
So Mr Author... I see your new Novel Updated Version of Apex System failed badly!!! Now I’m curious when you’re gonna continue with the Old Apex System??? It was obviously your Best Work & I’m sure you have a lot of Fans waiting for it too come back!! I hope you can Help us out & in return if you need Money then I’m more then Happy to PayPal you! Thanks
Just do it and never drop this m8 its really nice a funny mc and a good story cant wait for more chapters ? ..... go for it will keep waiting for more
I want to see how far the power of traps can go... xD <4Please don't drop the book even after WPC is finished... I want to see you write till the end muhahah! Also, you need 5k words to qualify. Will you be ok with just 1 chapter? (Now I'm just outright pressuring you to complete this...)Anyways, fighting! Traps rule!
A sword and a spear dulewealding? How? A spear requires two hands, did the MC grow a third arm? The spear is a very long weapon, almost always taller than the person using it.
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