I read all of Volume 1 and decided I wouldn’t continue.This story isn’t bad, but it really never had a moment that hooked me, so to speak. When reading, I try to feel something for the characters, and to be honest, all I could eke out for the characters here is a "meh."Maybe I’m dropping out of this race too early, and the second volume is really a step up, but 20-something chapters should be plenty to get a reader somewhat invested.
first of all, let me just say am excited to leave the first review. as a fellow author with an ongoing sci-fi novel i drew some inspirations from this novel. the 1st chap captivated me to read more. author, continue the good work.
The story's great. It's keeping my interest and has a good pacing. Most of the time, it's easy to read. But occasionally and for seemingly no reason, the chapter will be written in old English, or they'll use overly fancy words, and it takes the immersion out of the story for me. But outside of those instances, which honestly isn't that often, I love this read and would recommend it to anyone who's intrigued by the Synopsis.
A character living in a world in which there is the internet and porn and he doesn't know how a pussy looks....I might understand being a virgin and never having kissed, but the character is an idiot.
The start is already looking promising. I have only read three chapters but the writing is really good and hooks you in.Overall a great reading experience, just spend some time and read it your self.
if you are into wish fulfillment novels, give it a try, as long as you can stand having grammar errors every 2 or 3 paragraphs, you may enjoy it
When I’m reading I wish to have more chapters
Waiting to see how this turns out. Off to a great start!
The novel is very interesting, both the way the writer started and the way he end it ,it very good. Thanks for the novel.
I am at a loss for words,this is a whole new type of amazing
After reading so far. I must say, the book is great! had me on hook. felt like a emotional roller coaster, Drama, suspense, romance, plot twists. i enjoyed it and I am hoping to stick with this one till the last chapter.
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